This was a great and long chapter I love it

Thanks for sharing! That was great.

Yo guy I really like this first chapter its very enjoyable and likeable. I would recommend however to make seperations from one point of view to another it makes it jarring to read when you are being Naruto then suddenly you are Sasauke I would edit this bit and make it easier to read it.

It's a good fluffy story. I like it, it's not really intense or serious. Murasaki is cute too! I want a fox. Hahaa. Keep on writing! :)

sweet and cute

Nice lemon! I just love it when Sasuke is uke!

Very nice! Can't wait until Sasuke discovers that it really is Naruto!

Lol, Murasaki the pervert. Nice
It would've been better if she looked away though, silly fox. Nice name though. Purple.
And I'm not a huge fan of the moon girl (Tsuki, means moon), OCs annoy me, but whatever...
Your story is okay, but sometimes you need to be more direct. Say what an item is, describe without over-embellishing and don't use too much Japanese. Seriously. The story is filed under English, people don't want to read 'gomen', 'aishiteru' or even the simple 'ne'. Just because I can understand these doesn't mean everyone will. Honorifics should be fine if you use them properly, but even then be careful.
I'm sorry, this came out quite harshly, but if you want to improve your writing it would be a good idea to take this into account, and I wouldn't be telling you these things if I didn't think you showed promise and would be able to gain from it. XD

Very cliché. But also very cute! I really liked your descriptions of the things we didn't know about. I liked this cute, fluffy story.

Peace!

~Crazylele1

I love this story.. I love reading stories where Naruto is smart and all that.. Thank you so much for writing it. :D :D :D :D

Awful. What annoyed me the most was that I had to go halfway through one chapter and get into the story, and then be horribly disappointed by the second half. Your Mary Sue character is extremely annoying, and nearly all of the characters are inexcusably OOC. Your grammar is awful. I can excuse some comma splices and other common errors, but when your sentences are incomplete, it grates on my nerves. It happens so often, too. I really, really hope that you don't plan on a writing career, because your hopes will quickly be shot down if you don't work on your characters and your grammar.

the ending is so cute and warm. kakashi makes me lol evrytime i read about him. good work. keep up the good work and do your best. i love this story.

wow, naruto did a brave thing to sasuke. finally sasuke flet love and know what it is and what it felt. yeah for the Murasaki being ptoceting naruto and his heart. i still love that nin-fox. naruto is a neat inside him home. yeah kiba helping naruto and Murasaki out on their training. i'm glad that tsuki is walking with naruto. oh no they took naruto. tsuki kicks their butts in fighting but she did her best. now sasuke can help. yeah sasuke coming to save naruto and kicked butt. aw sasuke told his feelings. lol Murasaki them having sex. lol

poor naruto have to buy clothes at other villages on his mission. *sigh* the village is a butt head for doing that to naruto. naruto is going to have a new look at the fesvtail which is funny cause he can go around freely without his freinds knowing. wow naruto is a different person which is fun to read more about. love the story of the dancer which sasuke saw. yeah for tsunade kick butt to all the peole in village being a jerk to naruto's feelings. go tsunade. finally his friends knows naruto's past. sakura better cry and i hopley say sorry to him. at first when i heard about tsuki i was mad at her, now i like her for now. if she was good to him when he was little where was she when naruto needed her most. after i read more about her i like her even more because she is helping out naruto. aw everyone he knew made a party about him.*tear* that is awesome tht kiba gave naruto the nin-fox. it is a really good gift for him and it fits him well. i want one of those. go sasuke for the kick ass gift that he got him. still i love the little fox. so far it is kick ass story and i love it.

this was nice and sweet XD