superb story could you continue this masterpiece i mean seriously where can you find stories about paul jackson pls vontinue this pls

She was present at the crash site. Her corpse was lying just outside the chopper. Please continue with the story though. It's nice.

Been 5 years now...

More please.

This is a great story I do have a few pointers thoe. For the most part your research down but ther wer a few mistakes most of witch have already been pointed out. But the one that vexes me the most is that everybody outside the military calls everyone in the military soldiers (theres a difference between a soldiers airmen sailors and marines)

Now to comment on VissuallDentificationZeta's post
The marines don't use ch-47 chinooks at the time this game was made the used ch-46 SeaKnights. Special forces are an army special operations force and have nothing to do with the USMC. And yes the us marines are an elite force and have Been called by meny the elite fighting force of the world elite dosnt mean SOCF (special operations capable forces) and ther a lot of SOC ( special operations capable) marines it just means the best at what you do. So maby TheWatier isn't the only one thet needs to do some research.

It might not be obvious at first but Paul Jackson is black, he's the dude on the cover of Modern Warfare 1.

Damn, Jackson sure is a fuckin' tough one. Finally, I story with Jackson as the main character, 'bout damn time I found a story like this. Fuck yeah. :D

This is good stuff. I am a cod4 mw fan myself. Hurry and write more.

The pilot's last name is Pelyo, or a spelling simlar to that. Nice job otherwise!

I just thought about the aftermath mission and wonder what would happen. So I decided to check for a story. Imagen my suprize when I find a story for that situation. Anyway I like the story so update please.

I had to go back and rifle through the previous chapters just to refresh myself on what the fuck was going on! It's been so damn long.

Shit, kudos on remembering the story existed, and the update was nice ;)

oh write more

Ah hahaha! yes, yes, yes! My favorite story is back in business! wow, im really hyped up that you decided to get this out. you have no idea how happy you made me and probably others!

As for the chapter, i liked it. Especially how you portray your characters.. i like Richard, a big friendly guy if you ask me.

Anyway, please, keep on it.. or i will be bugging you like i did.. just a lot more frequently. ';D

keep it up buddy!

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Chris

Thx for the update. Please don't forget to add reguralry, I really find your stories interesting and well written. Keep up the good work.

Very nicely done. Definitely gets the action flowing again, and shows an interesting side story to the one we saw in the game. I can't wait for the next chapter, so I hope you'll write it and post it here soon.

Started reading this way back, and was hoping that you'd keep going with it. It was really good, and I wanted, and still want, to see what happens next!