Good read. Thanks

A very good and interesting story.

Really liked how it was set up.

I like this a lot. I was quite curious about how Neji and his rep would fare after the chunnin exams, in light of what he did to Hinata. Good job!

Go Hinata! It was awesome how she stood up for herself. Too bad it was in the wrong situation. Wonderful job.

Wonderful! Very nice. I loved the raw emotion that seemed to overpower Neji even in denial. Writing style is great, pacing is too and it was a very good read. Burnt Bridges would be the perfect title for this. Kudos! Very nice overall.

I like it. thanks for writing this piece

Love your work :D

You're a very wonderful writer! Love all your stories!

I'd love to see a follow up to this. Where he is being ridiculed and they see him and Hinata acting friendly towards each other.

cute story!

Very cute, especially the beginning with Tenten as the narrator because I imagine that talk like that would have happened after something like the Neji/Hinata fight.

The only advise I'd give, is to use the honorfics, which you did some of the time but not quite all the time. Lady hinata or Brother Neji sounds out of place. I realize that is the literal translation but since we do not normally use such terms in English they seem to take on an extra importance rather than being something that fades to the background like Miss or Mr. would.

Keep up the good work!

Very nice. You weave the touching and the funny together very well-the bits about Orochimaru and "Kibo and Shina" were hilarious, while the emotional struggles between the two cousins were very strongly portrayed. Awesome job with this!

Yay! I also believe Hinata has backbone sometimes. :) Neji and Hinata Cousins :)

The Hyugas are such an interesting family and well written stories that go into their relationships with each other are always interesting. I really like the Hinata Neji interaction in this one. I always thought that the time after the chunin exam must have been really awkward for the two of them and that their reconciliation was probably very hard for both. Great story.

That was just the most beautiful neji hina story i read...and ur style of writing is just so...wow...perfect! great job!

If I weren't so lazy and pressed for time right now I'd sign in and add you to my favorites list because with just two fics you have become one of my favorite writers with oddly enough my favorite coupling.

It is wonderful how you realistically portray the characters and give some depth towards their personalities Neji being as serious as he is it isn't impossible to see him as such a person. And even slowly showing a growing maturity in the characters that isn't instant but strained and proceeding step by step in a much more realistic manner. So insightful. I'm almost upset that you are in school and can not write more fics.