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Why didn't Naruto just use his Shadow Clones to help carry all of the shopping?

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that's it!

i'm gonna just stop reading right here; right now cuz it seems like who's going to be the seme and uke was keep switching,and that got me frustrated to no end! DX
at 1st,when kid!naruto was still active,so far the whole thing was (completely) sasunaru. and then since kid!naruto has been 'killed' by kurama,sasuke is starting to think too hard and getting internally all emo but still manage to make me think this situation was still sasunaru/sasunarusasu(a bit). but to the point when naruto starts to winks or make a 'fruity' comments at him,everything seems changing more clearly and clearly till that i can't finally handle it anymore when sasuke had reunion with itachi

but really? it's so unusually for me to read a ninja universe fanfic but u barely mention 2 or more of the jutsus in this story,especially the useful 1. like when naruto was carrying all of those groceries to the estate all by himself,andlet me quote my thoughtstupid enough to not making any clone to help him. even the same damn thing goes to sasuke; why not use kagefreakingbunshin to bring naruto's forgotten pyjama and sleeping hat FOR FUCKS SAKE THEY'RE NINJAS!:'v

anyway,when u keep spelling kurenai instead of kunai,i had a hard time to not LMAO-ing XD i mean... imagine sasuke slicing ppl with 'kurenai' lol i feel sorry for that red eyed woman

oh and also,i skip to the last chapter before,and the ending is sucks. cuz with that kind of ending,i can't call it happy ending... yet

it was really great fic, but end?... not fan of that... just get to one persona and that's it? no more things to do? like talk with sasuke or itachi and all... pf, and another fic for this has just 2 chaps, soooo you messed up end, could be better

I loved it! It was sincerelly one of the best naruto fics I've ever read. Everything was in there, great descriptions, great dialogues, the characters were not OOC even Kyuubi which I find impresive and the story line was to die for. Seriously it's really original and the fact that you kept going back and forth between young naru and old naru was keeping me on my toes the whole time. The narusasu relationship was also incredible and I think that was exactly what I'd been waiting for. Thank you for writing, didn't sleep the whole night and I had class but F**k it.

This was a really nice story, though the ending was lacking. I enjoyed it. I'm looking forward to how you'll be writing the revamp.

Interesting story, good grasp of characters and personalities. Definitely will add this to my favorites

I liked this. Especially the first few chapters were good. Later on though you seem to have forgotten that they are ninja. And that Lee can't use any chakra at all. So the whole subplot of Naruto teaching Lee his jutsu to help him and Gaara is just wrong. Nice ending but kinda weird and confusing with the mentally aging outer Naruto... I definetly liked the conclusion though!

No that can't be the end! Come on!

it was a unique plot
an amazing fic but too sad to know that when the end is near,there's no more chaps coming.
Hope one day it will be completed

This was really good to read. I wish there was more Sasunaru moments though but I can't really complain for the moments they had were certainly mind numbingly cute. The one thing that I will complain about though is the fact that I feel you rushed the ending. What happened to Sasuke? (Well we know but where is their reunion I'm sure other readers aside from me were looking forward to the reunion between older Naruto and Sasuke). I felt it missed important key points/paragraphs in the very last chapter. It was a good read but the ending was short a bit cut off-yknow snappy. It was missing things but otherwise very good job done on this.

This i s beautiful! I love it to pieces.

And lastly, this final chapter was a bummer. It feels like a couple of paragraphs are missing at the end. Where was Sasuke? Why didn't we get to see his reaction to the New Naruto? I didn't support the decision to make Little Naruto into the bad guy to begin with, so to me, it didn't feel like ending the story with Naruto's victory over Little Naruto was climactic enough.

Part of why I thought the arrival of Itachi is where the fic jumped the shark is because at that point, it seemed to me you'd run out of ideas. Itachi showing up was a cool thing to throw in, and since there hadn't been a bad guy, why not make it be Naruto's other personality? All this stuff didn't fit that well with the story, in my opinion.

In my opinion, the story was Naruto and Sasuke connecting because of a set of very strange circumstances. You could have made the second half of the story be about Naruto and Sasuke's romance, but there wasn't any romance. Or, there was, but it was all one-sided. Sasuke finally started feeling something for Naruto, but Naruto didn't feel anything back. That's really depressing, and not what I'd been hoping for from a fic tagged "romance."

But even if you lost faith in the pairing and didn't want them to end up together, we still should have gotten a little bit of Sasuke in the end. Since there were two Narutos in this fic, Sasuke was our most consistent main character, so it definitely felt like something was missing without him. Even one little paragraph where he and Naruto meet and we can see his relief that Naruto is okay would have been fine. :/

Making Little Naruto into the villain bothered me as well. We spent more time with him in this fic than we did with Big Naruto. I liked Little Naruto. He was sweet and his relationship with Sasuke was cute. And unlike Big Naruto, Little Naruto actually had a crush on Sasuke. Well, he did, until this part of the fic decided to pretend that all of Little Naruto's fluttery feelings around Sasuke never happened. :/

This to me is the part where the story jumped the shark. There was simply no purpose in bringing Itachi back to life. It's nice that you wanted him to live, but there's got to be a pretty important reason to resurrect a dead character. Itachi coming back to life should have had a major impact on the plot. But it didn't at all. He was just there.

Doing something just because you want to isn't good storytelling. I could write a character with my name and have her be the strongest ninja in Konoha AND be the girlfriend to Naruto and Sasuke just because I wanted to. But if I did that, people would be right to flame the hell out of my fic.

So what did Itachi do after he came back to Konoha besides make out with Sakura and turn Sasuke broody? Did he cure Naruto's split personality? (That was the plot after all...)