Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot,

I wish you would write more this is a good story.

So happy you did Draco justice; so many fics portray him as a wannabe death eater. Great story

Please update soon!

I have utterly enjoyed this story. I hope to see more . But as with life we dont always get what we want It is great I have enjoyed the ride.

You keep making them resolve some tension only for it to not change at all. You keep making Harry, who is supposedly calling himself a monster for even acting forward with a woman who was clearly receptive to him, make the same forward moves at every chance so you can force more tension. Worse still, you have both of them blaming themselves for everything bad between them or just for things that’ve happened that were beyond their control and both of them think the other is stupid for blaming themselves.

They are basically just self deprecating retards with Alzheimer’s.

.. ‘so she was right, the killing curse is green’.. yes, because he DIDN’T have nightmares about the flash of green as a child, he DIDN’T see it again and hear the curse being said when near dementors, he DIDN’T see Crouch-Moody use it in defence class and of course, he DIDN’T see Voldemort using it when their wands connected. You’re right. He only just realised the killing curse was green then, as it wasn’t like he didn’t know already.

Can't wait for the next update:D
Love the story :)

Good

That’s all? Write more pls I love this story!

Hermione got veritaserum from where? Only accomplished Potion masters are even allowed to brew it and it is heavily regulated.

Are we supposed to take Hermione's threat seriously? Bellatrix would annihilate Hermione with little effort since Hermione isn't in the least but powerful and if a book doesn't tell her how to do something she is worse than useless.

Telling Hermione is one of the most stupid things he could do since she is a known snitch. Does Harry's firebolt ring any bells?

I've gotten seriously hooked on this story, and the detailed chapters are fantastic so far.
Given that the storylines have concluded in the books, I think you should be free to mess around with things to fit your own narrative about how things could play out. Like, an alternate timeline obviously. No need to be slavishly devoted to how the books unfold in the larger scheme of things. Keep up the good work!

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.