This shit is garbage never write another Naruto fanfic ever again. You ruined this shit with that dumb ads Sakura and Hinata crap. Rating: -infinity/10 absolute garbage.

Great job please continue

Awesome

Yeah those two have better have a really good explanation.

Jiraya and Tsunade would've laughed about the clones. Jiraiya for the one groping Hinata, and Tsunade for the beating he got from the rest.

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U have messed this story after chap 3 and 4. The romance seemed to be leaning into Hinata more then Sakura and I have been recently fed up with this stupid affection there showing with the stupidest training sessions they have. Comedy doesn't suit you if u keep making Sakura the same as she was with the only difference that she likes hin. Would advise to have equal romance with both Hinata and Sakura. 1st got me so hyped and now it feels so terrible. Do more Naruto being dominant and quit it with the inner hinata, not everyone needs it -_-

Dude wtf... you fucking ruined the whole series with this bullshit... why would you that...

No

doin awesome man whens update?

I'm really hoping you're going to continue writing. Your idea of the wind element is very unique and makes for a fascinating alternate Naruto. Do you plan on Naruto being the only one to reach this level of elemental manipulation? I could see Sasuke trying to match it (he's got Suigetsu, who already has the water transformation to help him, after all). I can just see an insane fire elemental Sasuke meeting Naruto head-on causing mass devastation...

OK so don't say (naruxhina or naruxsaku) in description if you list the story as a naruto & hinata fanfic

jesus you gave it away and now i cant even start to read your story without already knowing the "secret" pairing

...whatever hope this will be good

Wonderful chapter. I liked most of it but some of the Naruto/Hinata conversation confused me a little too much. I understood what was going on but it seemed randomly placed and somewhat out of context. Perhaps if you tried to write the scene without all the flashbacks and pauses, and fancy thematic/dramatic paragraphs in between thought (from "Naruto never wanted to do that again" to the end). Maybe if you had chosen a different time, after all there was chaos going on in the dinner room, and I think it was at an awkward time. I hope you plan on updating though so please. I want to know what's going on with Sakura.

I find this story really interesting. Please update soon.

wow thats awesome story bud please continue i like to read more