Dude. That hurts!

wow depressing but still really good

Wow. That WAS depressing. Depressing and you just totally gave me a punch to the heart. But...gah! It was really good anyways. :P

Sad but well written and very good

Very nice...

so what you're saying is that Lilly isn't a bi/gey in this story but Miley is? Lol sorry...making sure!

sorry about your breakup, first off. i know it's a tough thing to go through. things will get better though, there's always a little light somewhere in life. secondley i love this story. absolutly brilliant! it was very intense and powerful. i could relate to miley a little because i've been there before. hope you feel better soon though.

Brilliantly written, I only wish more Liley writers had your caliber, to write fluff, angst, tragedy, whatever. Anything you write is worth reading. Please continue to write Liley of any style you feel like, and I'll read it. :)

Wow, it was so...intense. It was...powerful. You should write more like this. It's amazing. Good job!

ok wow, i TOTALLY freaking loved this. im not really into the whole darkness but I can understand all of this because Ive been there myself. sorry to hear about the relationship situation but great job on the fic.

ESPECIALLY the opening: A 4 letter word that causes so much agonizing pain and mental exhaustion that its no surprise the connotations of the color red interpret as blood, danger, warnings … An overall suitable blend for something symbolizing the crimson heart because the worse type of love aches and slices away at your insides, while the outside charade radiates anything but profound misery.

GEN-I-US!

~LJBard

First, sorry about your breakup. That type of pain can only be rivaled by someone's death, because it truly is the death of a relationship. My heart goes out to you, truly.

As for the story, it was extremely powerful. Very sad, yes, but very moving. Dwelling on it could certainly be disheartening, but when a reader tastes it and moves to something with a brighter outcome, then that story becomes more uplifting due to the impact of the former story. Heartbreaking, but still an intense story.

aw. is this gonna be a full story?

This was an excellent piece. Miley's turmoil tears at your heartstrings and makes you want Lilly to change her mind so badly if only so that Miley will smile again.

That was really depressing, poor Miley :(

But it was written very well, great job! :)

Really depressing x ) But I liked it all the same . I love your stories . And you writing is really good . But you need to update Fire Without Smoke ! I love that fic, and it's been so long since I last received an email saying that a Liley fic had been updated ( Waiting for next Liley fics . Great job (:

This was totally sad but so good. I love your word usage, you make me wish I could write. I think this story was actaully more about description and writing style than about Miley and Lilly, at least that is how I felt. I enjoyed it.