Wow. I see this was written a long time ago so who knows if you will even read this. But this T rated fic was seriously more romantic and sexy than some of the smut fics I have read. What a lovely emotional piece, and so true to character too. And it was nice to see Inu's relationship with Kikyo not cheapened or dealt with by disrespecting Inu's first love. The poor woman suffered enough without some of the ire this fandom heaps on her. Thanks for the story.

painful but good

well

Thank you!

I LOVED the kiss scene! I was swooning big time. Please please please continue writing InuYasha/Kagome romance because you nail it!

Amazing :')

This was amazing and fantastic (sniff) I loved it.

This is a beautiful story. It portrayed perfectly the turmoil between these characters. Very well written! Definitely going on my favourites list! :D

This was a beautiful and romantic story! I loved it so much! I don't think that you were too obscure at all; In fact, I think it enhanced the story. I also liked how you kept returning to the darkness and how it hides so much. You also used a lot of good description, and you didn't stick to simple language, which made the story that much of a better read. The ending when they say the two "whatever happens..." is my favorite moment, because it shows how powerful, how eternal, their love is. I really enjoyed this story!

;-; (sniff) (sob)...so adorable...(sniff) (sob)...so sweet...(sniff) (sob)...so adorable and sweet...

Wow, you are extremely talented!

Amazing! Simply Beautiful... Fell in love instantly... 3

Whether you're returning to fanfiction or just posting in a moment of inspiration, I still think that this fic was good. It was written very well. I mean, *very well*, like, beutifully. I really don't know how to say what I want to say, but, it was kinda...inspiring I suppose. You reall have a talent here and I know myself that my skill isn't as great, but just reading this, and how it was written, it just makes me want to write more and improve more. I just feel this sudden urge to write.

I really did like this fic a lot. And fyi, I'm going to add this to my favorites. And even if you're not going to continue writting fanfics, I at least hope you just continue to write. Because you're a really talented author.

Blessings!

Miss Saigon11

I love your writing style!

I've read one other of your stories, Secret love, Secret power. And it was GREAT! Zaniistar (hope I spelled his name correctly) was amazing and I wanted to cry when he died. I loved the part where Inuyasha transformed into the true form! Sorry I didn't review, I was just kinda caught up in it and was always wating to read more.

Lol anyways, I'll try an rewiew more often.

Beautiful. Very well done :]