Very good! I liked it!

Excellent chapter!

More garrus? Uh, yeah!

But the flashbacks are neat, seeing the past of Shepard.

And now, on the planet Therrum with garrus, and a little flashback talking about Turians. I like how this is coming along :D

Shepard having flashbacks to the old day, and training.

Awesome :D

Loved it. Thank you for writing MO - wish it'd gone on longer!

Por muchos motivos tengo que reconocer que esta es una de las MEJORES historias (alternativas) para ME1.
El desarrollo del vinculo de confianza entre la pareja, las escenas de acción, los recuerdos de shepard, aportaron no solo fluidez a la trama si no también una consistencia envidiable.
En cuanto al cierre, por demás esta decir que es excelente.
Realmente ha sido un placer leer esta historia!

Just marry me. This is amazing!

I love the way you tell the story of her past.

Great chapter!

I will only accept a movie if its CG and has all the same voice actors. And Garrus. Lots of Garrus. Because turians are freaking awesome. Lots of Tali and Legion too. Because quarians and geth are tied for second. Those three are my favorites: Garrus, Legion, and Tali. In that order. ME3 is going to KILL me...

Pardon my word choice, but holy damn.
I loved this. Loved the way you melded shepard's past with her present, the way you showed her evolution, and the way you wove your words together. I could see this play out like a movie in my head and I enjoy stories that allow me to do that. I've been reading fanfics for some inspiration and this definitely did it.
Thanks for sharing your ideas with the world,
Rhyss

Really good! I really enjoyed it too! I also have issues writing romance, going so far as to cancel it in exchange for a trap lol. Poor Femshep, betrayed by her lust :P Just don't have the guts to write it.

It's very good so far :). I like it

I really don't know where to start with writing a review, I guess...it will start with the word, wow.
Wow.
Normally I write a review for each chapter, but something compelled me to wait till the very end and boy, was I happy with everything.
The flashbacks to Shepard's past melded so beautifully that without them I don't believe it would have been as great of a story. They helped to explain the personality and how her character developed.
I did just about lose my shit when McDowell was the head of the bad guys. I really didn't see that one coming.
Now that this is done, I am sad that it is over, but also overjoyed to have found it. Thank you for sharing your work with us readers. :)