Wonderful story

Looking forward to the sequel

Keep writing as life allows

This story is over for me. You wrote exactly my worst fears, I truly hope people are not like Ginny or Mike.

This is very nicely written. But I truly hope it will end up as Harry/Ginny, I clearly would hate it otherwise. I never review untill I have finished the fanfic but I am so worried Ginny won't want Harry in the end that I can't stop myself. Not that I like Harry that much (and even less in here for now) but you have to pick a side and Harry is the hero (and I don't like Mike at all tbh).

Sorry but this is not Ginny...better delete this

Great start...getting chills already.

bland and completely ooc.

Are you sure this is a H/G fanfic, You wrote Ginny a a thick headed, cold hearted and damn annoying bitch. I wonder why Harry loves her...

I think you don't know Ginny!

Excellent writing. Promising story and I like Ginny in this - she sounds slightly younger (more polite) and not so aggro yet strong when necessary.

I liked the chapter but Harry's mom was muggle born. Sorfy to be mean ans say tjat

It will hardly matter to you, I imagine, a decade after you wrote the story, but the epilogue part 1 is where you lost me as a reader.

Ginny knows Harry loves her. She knows she loves him. Mike knows Harry loves her. Ginny knows that Harry has a link to her very soul. Giving herself to someone else for "a bit of fun", knowing that Harry will (at some point) inevitably know not only what she did but why she did it?

(and I think Mike might notice the whole silver blood thing at that point, but oh well)

It's GINEVRA not VIRGINIA I swear if I see this mistake again in another HP fic I'm going to flame on all the HG fics I can find even though I love that pairing.

Sorry but you got ginnys name wrong, it's actually Ginevra Molly Weasley, also when do g and h get together

wow

I loved this book from the beginning. I never really liked the Ginny/Mike thing. While the making out/holding hands was fine, as I have a best friend of a close nature like that, when he gave her her 'reward' for beating him in monopoly.. I didn't like it. I mean, I liked the way you did it, your writing if perfect. I just meant, I didn't like that she got.. That close to him. Holding hands with a best friend is one thing. Even making out is fine, as I said about my friend.. However, actually taking the close and trust filled relationship they had and turning it into this? She basically whored herself to him, knowing damn well that she is actually in love with Harry. And you've wrote yourself she know, and she has her own reasons why not to have that kind of relationship with him.. But going against what she knew form her and Harry's experience with the Link, and with her Sight she must be able to see his feeling in ways even he doesn't understand. She viewed his excursions with the Durslys easy enough in the span of all of a minute, why didn't she see the time the link opened, when her knew everything there was to know about Virginia, aka Ginny? Or did she refuse to look at such a time? Can she see the piece of herself, her soul, that resides inside him with her Sight?

... I'm afraid it's almost Midnight, and I have a long day at school tomorrow. It's been a pleasure reviewing you, and I wish I had longer to type and get more than this out. This bearly scratches the surface of my comments and questions to you.

With all the love and luck, Anubis.