| Reviews for Tales of Law and Love |
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lionelreck chapter 36 . 9/10/2017 At first I was really excited with this fic, I was kinda , "Oh yes yes yes, long Lanaworth fic, 200k words, and 36 chapters!" because other Lanaworth fic that I've found always too short. And I read the first chapter and I love it. But then, I was like falling from a building when I read the later chapters. It's more like a game novelisation rather than a Lanaworth fanfiction. The trial scene, the dialogue, is exactly like in the game. I dunno, maybe you just copied the game script and added Edgeworth/Lana thoughts. And in the last chapter, what's the point to write Matt Engarde case? The trial scene, kidnapping, etc? What does it has anything to do with Edgeworth/Lana relationship? Sorry if I sound too rude, but I really disappointed with this fic. Because I want to read a story which explore Lanaworth relationship, maybe with some fluffy stuff, I don't care if it's OOC, different with canon, I don't care, I just want more Lanaworth. If we must stay with canon, it won't be called a fanfiction. Not to read that I have know from the game and I have remember every single dialogue in my head. I hope you will make a revision because the game novelisation was ruined this promising story. |
jossgabri7 chapter 36 . 6/27/2017 Great story, it's hard to find Edgeworth/Lana fic, most fic are too short. You keep both Edgeworth and Lana in character. But I have some critics, I hope I don't sound too rude. You put too much spoilers from the game, and you write too much exactly like in the game, and made me skip all the trial scene that I have know from the game. I prefer to read the trial and scene that you write by yourself. The novelisation from the game was taken too much part in this story, made Edgeworth/Lana relationship story closed. If you continue this story someday, I hope you will write more about Edgeworth/Lana relationship especially their wedding, their life as husband and wife etc and you diminish scenes from the game. Keep up the good work, and best wishes -jossgabri7 |
rustyfeed chapter 36 . 6/28/2016 It's sad to see this as the last chapter of this wonderful story. I do hope that someday, this will be updated, rejoicing every loyal fan of this underrated pairing. Everything was wonderful, well-put. It deserved to be given a chance for a pairing that I know some people will never think of seeing, mostly because of their childish fantasies with Edgeworth. All in all, great job. I hope to see the return of this story, if ever Lana never returned in Ace Attorney. |
Miss Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/26/2015 Thank you! Thank you for this! I've just read the first chapter and let me tell you, you are amazing! You have no idea how much I ship Edgeworth/Lana. I just got into the fandom and I was bummed to find out that there aren't many shippers of the two. Most fics that I found were either too short or incomplete. Yes, I know this story is incomplete as well but it is quite long (200k words! Enough to entertain me though it would probably leave me hanging, I guess :)) and it seems like you haven't really updated in a long time and probably never will but I just really wanted to thank you for this contribution to the fandom. :) I really do hope you update soon. |
marauder68 chapter 1 . 5/29/2013 I recently replayed Phoenix Wright, and I thought,"I wonder if they have any Lana/Miles fics?" I am so glad I found this. I literally could not live without this fanfiction. I love how we see Miles and Lana think, and I hope you continue writing. |
Goodbyeeeee chapter 18 . 12/17/2012 You certainly have an affinity for Russia and Russian music... might we be a Russ ourself? Personally, I believe Russia is, after Germany and maybe Italy or Poland, the most interesting country in the world, so you may be on to something here. |
Goodbyeeeee chapter 4 . 12/16/2012 Is the name "Dzhugashvili" supposed to be a reference to Stalin's birth name? He seems like a competent, just guy. Of course, I've not yet read what's in store. |
Asteroth1 chapter 36 . 10/5/2012 This is very impressive fanfiction! One of the best on this site! I hope you will keep doing good work and finish this masterpiece! :-) |
crderf chapter 34 . 12/16/2009 An update, and a very long one at that! Awesome job and update soon! Interesting connection(s) with 1-5. |
Martial Arts Master chapter 34 . 12/16/2009 Woohoo! You FINALLY uploaded another chapter! Although, I'm not really sure Adrian Andrews is all that similar to Lana. Lana acted like an ice queen; Adrian just acted cool and collected. |
crderf chapter 33 . 3/5/2009 Awesome job! i love playing poker with my dad and brother, even though I always lose. Update soon! |
Repp Ohs Sarg chapter 32 . 11/21/2008 Really Great chapter, . Though, I'm confused about a few things. Is the last part of the scene in America? If so, did Lana and Ema come along with Miles to America? Or did Lana and Ema come first? BTW , good work on the scene between Edgeworth and Gumshoe! Also, just a question, do you feel Apollo Justice is too short to be true? |
crderf chapter 32 . 11/20/2008 Hey. Really nice job. I read this while I was supposed to be finishing my research report. I love the story, which explains why I halted my report. Update really soon. You are an awesome author! Kudos to you! |
crderf chapter 31 . 11/8/2008 Aw! What a cute chapter. You finally got them together. Nice job on the story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update anytime soon. Kudos to you. |
Repp Ohs Sarg chapter 30 . 11/7/2008 You know, I keep wishing you would switch to Phoenix POV from time to time, but anyway, the story IS good. What I'm really looking forward to, is the final case in JFA, where Miles and Phoenix reunite. And the final case in T&T, where they reunite again. Investigating with Edgeworth was a blast, wasn't it? And I'm also wondering as to how you will mesh Edgeworth into Apollo Justice. Excellent Chapter! Take That! Smokin'Oken |