Reviews for Black Wings
LunaticYoutuber chapter 4 . 8/13/2016
Plz continue this story!
aqua chapter 4 . 8/22/2009
hey i love it more as soon as you can.
TeamEdwardCullen chapter 4 . 7/8/2009
I think Fang should figure out that Max isn't who she appears to be and he warns the Flock about it. The story is good so far!
teamedwardcullen chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
It's a good first chapter so far!
Brambleberry or Lionflight chapter 4 . 3/21/2009
GREAT!
Hikari Urania chapter 4 . 3/5/2009
Just what the world needs...a killer max...update soon!
Isabelle Gray Gray Wolf chapter 2 . 9/1/2008
this is good. i can't say too much, i'm on a school computer and i'm ment to be diong an assigement.

Kai

- Isabelle Gray / Gray Wolf
Lady Blanche chapter 4 . 6/12/2008
My jaw just dropped. Good spelling, good plot, good grammar, good description, accurate points of view...please keep writing!
chooseURfate chapter 4 . 5/20/2008
Wow... really good. i love how Max is having some self doubts and that some of the old max is still in her. very good.
deleteasap chapter 4 . 5/10/2008
This is really good, I honestly like it. I would only make one recommendation - check the summary, there's a few misspellings (nothing big, but you might attract more readers if everything is spelled correctly).

just a thought. but the story was amazing, i loved it - can't wait for a new chapter!
flxwer chapter 4 . 4/10/2008
AH! Update! Really good.
Taeniaea chapter 4 . 3/18/2008
Great Story!
Devil's Sunrise chapter 4 . 3/1/2008
I like it! It's nicely done, and I don't understand why you were targeted by ficsquad either. Whatever. I don't really try to take them seriously, although really everything is in good humor for me.
cso826 chapter 4 . 1/29/2008
This is good! Oh and maybe fang should kiss her
Jacky06 chapter 4 . 1/29/2008
Oh-oh what will Fang say? Plz post soon. ]
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