horrible who would read this Not For Kids

FINALLY I FOUND ANOTHER OROCHIMARU FAN...IM SO HAPPY YOSH LET OUR FLAMES OF YOUTHFULNESS CONVERT THE NON-OROCHIMARU FANS! (Imvalso a voldemort fan too,...he's hott)

Awe I'm reading the sequel bravo in this.

That ending. Hahahahaha 10/10 would read again

you are so good at this I love it oro-chan is my fav.

I loved it love love love love it

omg that was funny w

Hi! This fiction is very beautiful, both for your writing style, and for the story. I really liked reading it also because (if you had not realized *irony*) that I'm a fan of Orochimaru. My friends say hat he's my love-inexistent (I always cry when I hear it :'( ).
If I seem not many enthusiastic (which is not true), it's because I'm not very well in English... in effect... sorry for my bad English; I'm Italian, and for this reason I'd like to ask you if I can translate your story in Italian, on EFP. In this way all Italians will rejoice this beutiful story (obviously I will put in the description your name, in this way readers will know that you had wrote the story, and not I ). This because I've searched all across the Internet but I find really few stories about Orochimaru x female OC.
I hope that you will accept, congratulations again to your story.
Katara

cool :)

interesting

cool

The story would of been better without you chatting with the charcters. It would be okay for a humor fic, but not a romance/angst fic.

Great story, i love Orochimaru with all my heart! This was greatly writen and i am jealous of your talent lolz! Kabuto and Sasuke are jealous :P

Loved it Simple as that.

lmao!

That. Was. Amazing. I am absolutely speechless. :)