This is one of the best-written Naruto fics I've ever read, you have to know that. Thanks for writing this fic, I love every bit of its and you don't know how sad I am when I find out it only has 9 chapters :( I'm really looking forward to more, as a good Gaara/Sasuke fic is so hard to go by.

Amazing story, its one of the best ive ever read, i do hope you plan on finishing it. Xx

This has been a very interesting and enjoyable read. There was quite a bit of disappointment when I went to click for the next chapter and the button wasn't there. :) I sincerely hope you continue it!

Hehe... fishmonger...

Interesting!

I honestly cracked up at that 'fishmonger' part! Partially because I was trying to picture Sasuke as a fishmonger (which is pretty funny in itself), and secondly because, of all people, Gaara said it lol.

I love what you've done with the story so far and how you've written the characters, I hope you're continuing on with it! I would totally comment on every single chapter after this one if you did XD

Fishmonger. xD

...The fact that Gaara was serious about it is what scares me too.I like thaws way this story is going, and like I said on lj, you have them in character so much that is makes me jealous. D xD

I really like the way this story is going and I really want to read more.

I really hope to see more this fic rocks!

hm your story is so "WOAH"

Every chapter makes me think of "more-more!"

And I can't help but save this is word

XD Keep up the good work!

Interesting story. SasuXGaa stories are very rare, and this has a wonderful plot! Well done so far, and well written!

I love your story, the way you detail stuff and take the story down a coherent road, it's very nice to find a story like this one, please update soon .

Wow you update quick. I must say, this Shin Kadu is a really interesting character. "mask beneath the mask" indeed. I don't think I'm quite smart enough to figure him out, so I guess I'll just have to wait to find out.

I gotta say, you seem to have Sasuke pegged, as does Gaara. Its very realistic to come to the conclusion that Sasuke needs there to be a big bad to chase. It would seem to be his constant in life. So its all very believable indeed.

Really your Gaara and Sasuke are very believable. And how cute they are finding that they are friends, and yet its kind of awkward because of Gaara's ineptness with emotions. Very well done indeed. I look forward to more of this story!

hm, I just realized that half of my review that I wrote out before was cut off or something. oO' Anyways I'd just like to say that what's going on between Sasuke and kadu is getting interesting by the minute. You can't really tell who's on top of the other which makes things exciting.

Sasuke and Gaara finally have a friendship now, eh? Seems like they had one for a while but they just..didn't notice? Yeah, right. Well I'd like to see what's going to happen next soon. haha.

Let's just say the way you write Gaara and Sasuke having conversations are very realistic and I could picture this scene going right through my head. Ever since I read this story I kinda could see the resemblance between Sasuke and Gaara's "goals in life". Not to mention they could've probably been friends if Gaara hadn't tried to kill Sasuke.

Great chapter. A friendship will proably do them both some good. Them having a heart to heart was sweet. Looking forward to more.

Well, about Kadu and Sasuke: They're playing Shadows games quite deadly, more like chasing each other intellectually, I have to wait and see who really have the upper hand in the situation.

Obviously that little chat with Shin (the sincerity of it, I'm propously overseen it) triggered all the thinking in Sasuke, I have to say you subtlety to gave a more solid ground to the theories the fandom already have, you make it credible, often, in fanfiction, authors would make it a some sort of getaway to revindicate Itachi, as the no-so-evil-i-made-it-out-of-love brother.

I'm on awed of Gaara and Sasuke In Character conversation, both so tense, so blunt so increible emotionally constipated. You're one of the few who actually can make the aforementioned emoted (somewhat) and make them not sound whiny or wansty. Just like two people who have trouble expresing themselves in terms of feelings.

You, my friend, make me write lengthy reviews, the horror.

You too can skip all the babble above and read this:

I LOVE YOU. WONDERFUL FIC. Brownies points for write fast and fine, dear.