This is such a sweet and sad story! How they died holding hands and they waited for Sasuke so they could die together! You have done an amazing job with this story and you really have a knack for heart wrenching writing! One of my favourites! If you are doing a sequel then maybe you could make it so that someone finds the garden or maybe they are reanimated with edo- tensei or something. I would love to read it! 3

Well that wasn't bad it's kind of stupid really that Sai has changed so much but oh well great story overall although could have been a happier ending

Well that totally sux don't give a shit about the loser Uchiha but killing off NaruSaku totally sux well whatever

Well that was interesting Sakura's mum blames Naruto such a tart everyone should beat her senseless

Well that was messed up are they seriously gonna die

Well that was fucked up they should wake up and kill both Biju then deal with that loser Tobi

Well that was interesting still cliffhanger at the end

Well that was interesting Tobi's a bad boy he shuld be sent to his room with no supper lol

Well that was interesting well the fighting begins huh Zetsu's dead already huh

Well this will be interesting the akatsuki are weak and pathetic with NaruSaku MinaKush KakaYama and that loser Sai I'm sure they can deal with Akatsuki and if reinforcements arrive even better Sasuke and his bumchums can do whatever the hell they want there just as pathetic Sakura should kill Karin, Naruto kill Sasuke, Kakashi Jugo and Yamato and Sai killing Suigetsu.

Wonder if Itachi can do anything Jiraiya should arrive and kill his stupid former pupils

Well that was interesting nice one Sakura giving Naruto's parents a punch defo deserved

Well this is interesting still I really don't understand why Minato and Kushina are working for those pathetic losers Akatsuki are they as delusional as everyone else about the tailed beasts if that's the case Naruto should kill them both parents or not

Well that was interesting still Sakura's parents are annoying

Well that was a surprise Minato and Kushina are alive keep putting in surprises don't ya

well that was rather interesting wonder what will happen no idea why Sai's even there he's not important at all, So is Minato not dead that's confusing