Cute!

haha. so much fun to read:] really well done. i love how you

kept on repeating some phrases. that's an example of some lit

term i should know for english class...anaphora? haha. idkk:]

great, nay, AMAZING story!:]

Loved it! How cute!

This is one of my favorites. It's great. :)

Kelly

So cute! I loved it, great job! :D

That was a great story! I loved it!

-Icetail

It was cute with Andromeda's indecisiveness and Ted's sweet nature, but it felt rushed at the end, and I highly doubt people in the early 70's said, 'Hell yes,' frequently as a common phrase like in today's culture. Other than that it was fine.

Hah! I love it, Lola!

(voice) DO you love it?

I love it!

(Voice) Are you sure you love it?

HELL YES!

Aww, that's cute! I like the repetitiveness of this piece. Just a wee bit of concrit: the line "Excepted it." should say "Accepted it."

The beginning was so-o-o-o-o cute! "Andromeda Black was never agreeable."

And "Until he came along and simultaneously closed her world and opened it up." was a really good line.

~ Kyota

Do I like this fic? Hell, yes!

It says "Hell yes" so many times it should be called 'Hell Yes'. LOL. Great job!

So cute!

I suggest reading 'A Keen Observer' by DeepDownSlytherin if you haven't already!

Loved it! :)

lol. that was one of your funniest stories ever. i love it!

Lol this was cute. I liked Andy saying "yes. No. Yes" lol. Good job!

- Gaby

PS: I know, isn't my Paul icon cute?

That was just cute! You should write somewhat "101 Ways To Say It Right" with Andy and Ted. That would be totally awesome!

So that's how you reviewd my chapter 6 part 1! You updated this at 2:35! I updated mine at abotu 9:45-ish.

Pinky x XD o.O

PS. Happy new year!