You should of let them have sex, so she would at least been pregnant with his baby before he died.

Booooooooooo

WTF? This is the ending?

Eddie Spears id's super hot! I usually picture him for Sam, but he'll do for Paul, lol. ;)

I'm crying make it stop please this is so beautiful it is but I'm so sad

Type your review i hv nerver cryd reading a story lk tht hope theres more

Hey I know its probably late but I just wanted to say that this story was amazing u r so talented to write such and amazing and sad story at the end I actually started crying
It was so heartbreaking but yet so moving because he told her to be brave, strong, and never stop singing any I bursted out crying but I honestly think u did an amazing job on this story.

That ending broke my heart

Its really good! Please do not make it have lemons down the road! your doing a wonderful job having them be fiscal and being descriptive but not too descriptive Which is sooo refreshing! Thank you!

Oh my gosh I love this! your doing a great (need t find another adjective) job. Thank you, for keeping things classy and interesting! there's nothing like tasteless smutt to wreck a good story and yet you are able to make it stomach dropping and romantic.

Its good Puals freaking out then calming down was kinda abrupt but it was fine, the stories good and it has a plot which is nice. I like it thanks!

Nice, its a little sudden Pual suddenly liking her and all, but you did say you changed your mind so that explains it. Its good, and I cant wait to see were it goes next. I only wonder how you will keep up the tension between Pual and Cara, but Im reading to find out. Thank you, for this great fanfic!

Wow that was great, you kept this seductive with the vampire without losing the artistic class it takes to keep things from becoming crass. Thank you, this is great!

Love it. Your very good, people actually have distinct personalities (which i havent found in most fanfics) and the main girl is likable! You did a great job with describing her, most fanfic writers make the girl like into some super model and you made her humble and very likable. Nice work!

Made me laugh. I hope its like this throughout, I like that its not filled with swearing or crude sexual comments. Your good I hope its like this throughout. Thank you i've been looking for a story like this