good story and hey at least haley pushed him to get his girl, hey who knew it would be a woman to give him some balls jk jk and update soon.

Oh I didn't see these update... it's a beautiful end for a beautiful story, little cheesy of course but I like it!

Arsy.

i loved it!

If only Luke would have really done this, and if only, Peyton would have been open to this. Good update!

Aw! Leyton fluffiness. We need more of that. Haha! Great job on this! Keep it up!

he he he, so cheesey. I LOVE it! It's so tradgic, and yet romantic! lol. It's...awseomely...awsome! Please UD Soon!Thanks so much. CANT WAIT! :)

Aw! Cute! Update soon!

Great second chapter Annie, it was really good to see the way you made such a small situation in a simple pizza delivery into a much bigger deal so quickly which was really good and also very funny at the same time.

In this chapter you also continued with the very boring ways that Peyton and Lucas have lived since whatever incident/s tore them apart evidenced by the pizza person knowing exactly where Peyton lived before she said it as well as the Lucas plane experience where he mentions being 'emotionally drained' and having second thoughts about the trip he made.

Excellent work as always, keep up the great work!

Simon

Hey Annie Great story so far

Really liked in the first chapter a lot of stuff especially that starting quote including the famous "you're always saving me" as well as the replys of "somebody has to" from Lucas in Seas 3 and the other one from Peyton in seas 4 which was really good because it set the tone of the story really well.

I also enjoyed in this first chapter how Lucas and Peyton's best friends being Haley and Brooke respectively both trying to get Leyton out of the bad patterns that have occured and try to convince them to take another shot at it.

I also liked how you portrayed Lucas and Peyton with Lucas being the one who obviously is really bummed about what happened and is living more like a rockstar or someone who doesn't seem to care much about their life anymore. That really spoke to me.

Peyton's portyal was also really good especially the part where she mentioned she had neglected people ironically perhaps the opposite of her famous line "people always leave" in neglecting most people apart from Brooke it seems.

Anways, impressive first chapter as always, keep up the great work!

Simon :)

great update, glad to see that luke got his rear in gear and got out there, cant wait to see what happens update soon

cant wait to see her reaction! he has to win her back. ud soon

ooh... great start! update soon!

Very nice storyline. :D Can't wait to read more.

Oh please continue really really soon! I wanna know what happens! I can guess and everything, but I wanna know!

Enjoying! UDS Please!