Uguh ;-;
I really liked it from Orihime's p.o.v. but its so sad and the angst ermergurd ;-;
Psh, when I read the kissing scene, I immediately rewinded back to the anime scene to see if something like that had actually happened and I'd missed it (*-*)... but then I remembered Kubo. And how he so rarely puts characters together e.e
But it was really good. 20/10 :3

It was sad but very well written.

Okay, at first I was gonna throw up about Inoue's list.. I mean, that's just crazy.. Obssession is a sinful attraction, different from under circumstances like this.. Anyways.!
Second, i almost throw my itouch cuz inoue's always like, "Kurosaki-kunKurosaki-kunKurosaki-kun!" Gah! If only I could tape her mouth when she always do that, -.-

And for the third, I was all "kyaaaaa!" When they kissed and, "Kubo why didn't you do this?" I was like an idiot quietly talking to myself and to the mirror to keep calm XD

As you can see in this review, i'm a majorsuperduperultramegafan of ichiruki :))) i'm crazy for them. As in.

Well that's my review, so.. Peace out yow! :3

OMG that was so freaking sad, i always did like Orihime more than Rukia so it's breaking my heart! More than just unrequited love, her love/obsession for him seems like more than that (although maybe it's just because you added too many details and emotions and nearly ripped my heart out you bastard XDD)

*runs away crying* ; A ;

This is a wonderful story! I feel sorry for Orihime but... I'm not exactly her biggest fan -.-'

... so I was just happy with all the IchiRuki fluff : )

Its really cute...I loved Inoue's viewpoint..

That was really sad, but well written. There were a few mistakes with commas here and there, but it was still amazing! You have talent.

Don't be so hard on your self, the story was really good.

XP ja ne

Beautiful one - shot. Loved it! :)

This is a 'wow'..

Two thumbs up for u! bd

wow! i'm a huge huge ichiruki fan! yay~ i feel bad for inoue here...but then again, i never really could stand her. but this pov of her's was really well written! thank you for sharing ur story!

It was good, sad but good

it was good you shouldnt doubt yourself.

poor inoue... i bet she's reely jealous of ichi and rukia... n i reely pity her. she seemed really hurt when she was healing rukia. but still, i support ichiruki and ulquihime! )

how can u say this is crap? this is GOOD!