Nice work with this! I always wanted to see Ed and Roy discuss the whole Tucker and Nina situation in more detail after that night, and I really wanted Roy to comfort Ed a bit because damn that was some awful stuff the poor kid had just experienced. So thanks for giving me a lovely dose of Parental!Roy here. It really made my day!

Nice use of colours as Roy finds his kinder side.

I love the symbolism! I can also see a marked improvement in your writing style as compared to you first few stories.

Agh the colors! Colors EVERYWHERE! Hahahaha!

Usually doing something like that would not work, not at all, but somehow it does in here. It really does and if I had to guess it's probably because this entire story was BASED on using colors to describe feelings (pointing out the obvious is my strong suit) so it worked out just fine

Thank you for writing

Wonderful work! That was incredibly interesting. what you did with the colors! Very unique, and flat out awesome :D

Awweee so cute...

LEMME HEAR AN AWWWWWW! *crowd goes AWWWWWW* That was so depressing and cute! Hm, I wonder how those two fit together... I loved the use of colors in this! I kept imagining each of the colors being associated with the emotions, and they all made sense perfectly. I also enjoyed your use of childish Ed, it's a nice reprieve from all of the older Ed stories. Your originality is stunning, and everything about your stories is unique in some way. Roy didn't seem to be OOC in this at all, but Ed was a tad strange. It was necessary though, and I think it worked great. Please reply! :D

Colors are great, aren't they? There's a color for everything, I love that! And this was done beautifully, a vivid painting in my mind! Absolutely great.

love the way you wrote it

Wow. That...was pretty amazing. I have one question for you:

Do you know what synesthesia (or synaesthesia) is?

If not,please, look it up! I think you'd be surprised. : D

The reason I say this is because I myself am a synaesthete; and I've got to say, the way that you described the reddish frustration, and the blue thoughts, and everything...it was so shockingly, realistically acurate, that I am truly amazed. I mean...WOW. XD

Great job!

6/5 ; 3

(Please pardon any typos)

That was interesting. I don't think that Edward was so explosive about it in the actual episode, or Roy so insistent but it had been something I'd been thinking about.

I had mixed feelings about the color thing. On the one hand, it helped with the emotional aspect of the fic a lot more, and on the other hand I found it distracting and slightly confusing.

I like it. My favorite line is: "You joined the military! This is your responsibility that you volunteered for!"

thats right give in to the child! Muhahaha! we get our way adults can't stay mad for forever! lol love the story.

cool...

This has to be the most brilliantly written piece of FMA fiction I have ever read!...I love the simple wit of colors mirroring emotion. it was a rainbow of Brilliance It brings me great joy to see other writers who fancy parental FMA stories! I am definatly keeping an eye on you!