ugh reading idiot naruto stories are so painful. I turn to fanfiction to get away from the chronic retarditis that plagues so many protagonists

if this fic wasn't a NaruHina fic I would stop reading at this point but as it is I'm starved for the pairing

"...first chapter hopefully be out in a few weeks."...9 years later...

In any case, really, REALLY good fic. Would definitely like to see more.

Hoping that Reifujin means 'Lady'? Well, you're in luck, it's closer to 'wife' so the connotations is more 'Lady of the House' even if it doesn't use the individual kanji.

Great story

Those names are kinda important to get right::
Tsuande - Tsunade
Naruo - Naruto

I would suggest getting a beta, or to spend significantly more time proofreading, these were far from the only errors I noticed, just the most jarring.
eg.
conscious - conscience
indescript - nondescript

There's an old saying;
Teacher: If you have two girls you like, choose the second one.
Student: Why, sensei?
Teacher: Because if you really loved the first one, you wouldn't have fallen for the first one.
This kinda reminds me of the saying above

This is a very good story. Well thought out and entertaining. I anticipate the sequel.

Great story, but it's been more than half a decade since your last post. Has the planned sequel been totally abandoned, or do you have any intention of returning to this wonderful world you've created and finishing it off? Hope to see you back sometime.

I like your story I have an idea for one but not the talent to bring it out fully it involves the idea that Naruto is born as a fraternal twin his sister is Naruko (I know got the name from fanfiction) he gets yang chakra she gets yin

yaaaaaaa she FINAL know

he needs to tell her

Rofl rofl the virgin speech!

Sora stopped wiggling and stared at Yasu. "Chocolate Espresso Crème Brule? Really?"
Rofl had me cracking up! I remember this story it was one of my first naruhina...well also one of my first fanfics .

yes so good story you have here

yes kick her ass