I love this book, your such a good author

Its a really amazing story that hangs on real.

it is getting tougher,i want to know more in chapter 3

i enjoyed the story and i would like to read the next chapter

Well, that was different than I expected it to be! How nice

A tinge of disappointment. I was all for Vale. But it is a mature ending.

Very nice story, & thats coming from a girl who reads fan fic... All the time, and their usually rough. I really liked your story, nice ending, with the guys leaveing Kallie alone. Very Well!

I was just really disappointed. I wanted to see her fall in love and mary Vincent.

Usually I don't read stories about vamps and stuff expecially after twilight was released. Dracula is more my type. Not to say that I don't like a good romance here and there..
Your writing was not original but I liked it. There were some typos but they can be corrected no big deal. I liked the dialogue expecially. I also really liked the songs you recommended for each chapter. Ha, I'm too much praising it seems.. But really I don't know what else to say and my English is not really perfect so contructive criticism is out of the question..
Anyways.. I read your profile (stalkerish much?) and found that there's a very little chance that you'll continue writing and do not have much time.. Remember, Never give up! if you can write and inspire people with your writings you should (no matter how many people think you write horribly)
I remember when I first started to write my 'little stories' (I was only 11) I thought they were so perfect and used to play some scenes (in a way I thought the character would) I used to feel so 'giddy' but then when I was 14 I stopped 'cause I thought they were too childish too much immature and too 'not perfect' I cried when I first started reading 'good books' I was jealous of their 'perfect' words (different authors) and threw my stories in the dust bin (dramatic much) but now I regret it. If I had continued.. I might have improved.. -sighs sadly- then I tried to write about myself (yeah, I have a dramatic life and I hope all the drama stops from my life! Ugh) but just couldn't find the words later I realised I had writer's block (and I still have it!)
so, NEVER GIVE UP! Or you'll just end up like another Anne. I'm not pressuring you to write if you can't but please do try.
Hope to see you writing in future.
-Anne L

Kudos 4 that story

That's a great story

I like taht fortune teller lady; people say she's crazy and just saying those things to scare the crap outta people, but she's telling the truth with no sugar flavoured coating. Thanks for writing such a great story!

Oooooohhhhhh, someone's jealous!

Liking Vincent a little less now; Vale's moving up, too. Well done!

this is probably a little sad, but I like this guy. He couldn't are less about how others think/feel, and he has good taste in music. this is great!