Thanks. I really enjoyed this. Lisa

I've added this to my favorites.
This is the second time I've read this story and I apologize profusely for not leaving a review the first time. I'm thinking that I must have been panting too much after the first read-through, maybe?

At any rate, you certainly did an excellent job with the smut and it was wonderfully vivid and fun to read.

I do want to point out, however, I feel you have sold your writing skills short. The summary calls this "total" smut" and in the A/N at the beginning of many chapters, you refer to your story as "pure, unadulterated smut" - I do not agree. It is not ALL smut, I will concede to say it's only about half smut (amazing as the smut is) - the other half of this piece is a well written story. You took time to explain why Sam and Dean were in 'Big Bill's', as well as the reasons Kelsey and Morgan were there too. But even more than that, you took the time to develop your own characters, gave up some background and give us some insight into the girls' lives. You also showed is what all four of the main participants were thinking as they went through some of the exact same situations, without making it boring. That is impressive in and of itself. And you did ALL of that really, really well - especially considering this piece is rather short and that it IS about half (well written!) smut.

So I say to you, accept that you wrote a good, short story, that just happens to contain some (HOT!) smut and not just a PWP. Because. You. Did. Don't sell yourself short.

And then, write a sequel. Or two. Or more. This could be a series. You've developed the characters, and the girls are genuine, believable and most importantly: likeable. Don't drag them around with Sam and Dean, but make then occasional 'fun' for the boys. That would allow you to continue your smut-centric stories but still not have PWP. I think that Sam and Dean could easily drop in on Kelsey and Morgan as they have their travels - as watchers of SPN we really don't see everything that happened to the brothers between their Hunts. Maybe they occasionally stop in Arkansas to help a 'friend' get over a breakup, celebrate a new job or just to say 'Hi' with a little more than a cup of coffee?
If you want to let the girls in on the 'family business', well, then write a Hunt of your own, where they learn the truth, but make it a basic one (it would help so the girls don't think Sam and Dean are the evil psychopaths the FBI will soon be making them out to be, based on the time-setting of this piece). Plus, what gal wouldn't say "thanks for saving me" with a nice romp in the sack, especially when said hero has already proven he's a god in bed?

Just a few thoughts. Thanks for writing.

Please, please, write more of these. It's hard to find a writer who can combine story and smut, and you do it beautifully. I even like your OCs, which is rare for me. You flesh out their characterization really nicely, especially given the short plot lines of your stories; I know that is an incredibly hard feat, which is why I personally have never attempted any OC fics of my own. Bravo! Well done! :)

-Giraffe

SEQUEL, PLEASE?

This was as good a story as it was HOT. Lol I look forward to another chapter or perhaps a sequel. :)

i love the story...

i was kind of surprised when i first started reading the story... thought it would be one of those bad written smutty stories- but you are an actually decent writer! well done... i'll make sure to catch up with the rest of you writings..

hope you update soon :)

OMG fantastic! Not only was the smut hot, but you made the girls really believable! I think it can be really hard to write likeable OCs, especially for Supernatural, but yours blew me away. You set it up, and introduced the situation so well, and the girls had such great, natural chemistry with the boys! Thank you so much for sharing this story, I enjoyed it so much!

great sory so far

want more loved it very interesting and well written

Nice. I'm not sure what else to say, but, NICE.

i just read this all the way through. and i can't stop laughing.

no the smut was good. the last part is just making me laugh so hard.

freakin awesome.

GREAAT STORY!

This was, by far, the best smut I've ever read. You're amazing.

Whew... I'm going to have good dreams tonight!

Great Story! Really Enjoyed it! Hopefully one day I will meet the brothers at a rest stop...*sigh*