The last line was so darling.

lol at the last line! This was nice and didn't seem OOC :)

SWEET! Aww, that is SUCH a romantic proposal! I love that!

Awww cute chapter!

haha simple and sookakashi thing to say

This chapter...it just made me so happy I couldn't even speak for a good four minutes. I hope they get together for real, and that this is how they do it.

Also, I'd like to confess a newfound love for you...r writing.

All my dreams came true in that last paragraph. And, to top it all off, it was funny. :)

great job! loved it very sweet!

How sweet! I like how things were gradually revealed through their conversation. Good job. _

I know exactly what you mean. I do the same thing sometimes when Im writing.

great stories! and great writing! keep it up!

Aww...How sweet! I really enjoy these little drabbles because sometimes a few well chosen words are far more poignant than a long, drawn out chapter. Great job! _

There is somethig about his little drabble that makes me smile. I think I like that you mentioned she was married but didn't directly say it was to Kakashi.

Dotty

The part about sharing a past with someone was introspective and bittersweet, but how things turned out is exactly the way I think they ought to turn out. We should throw this manuscript in Kishimoto's face and make him make it come true! ;P

Hahaha! This made me smile while I was reading it and I love how they walk off in different directions in the end as if nothing happened. Good job. )