Okay... Hazel. Right. I love some raw comedy :D

How did you manage to make everyone laugh under so much tension? I wish I didn't get "The Blank Stare" from my mother when I try to break the tension... Share your techniques, Sensei.

I hope that is not what my first fic was like O.o

I actually laughed. No internet LOL here... I actually laughed. Impressed? Yeah, so am I.

haha im usually a B/S fan myself but i agree with the whole "first fics suck thing" that was so funny and just couldnt pass up an opportunity to mock them...cassie

Lol. I actually found that the story was so unbelievably stupid that it was the funniest thing I had ever seen. (That WAS supposed to be a compliment.) Most of your reviewers had the right idea and was reviewing it for what it was. Some of them really annoyed me though. They were acting like this was a serious story. I mean, serious as in all in character and follows the cannon. It amazed me how stupid some people were ::cough::Angelus::cough::

I *LOVED* the first 5 chapters! I was cracking up hysterically while reading it! I'm a Spuffy shipper, but it's great to see a parody of bad B/S fics. I didn't find the 6th chapter very funny, except for Spike's cockney accent; that was clever. Oh, but overall, this was just excellent. ) TOO FRIKIN FUNNY!

Like, oh my god! It woz just so brill!...

Nah, I won't insult your intelligence with any of that bull. Anyhow, don't usually write reviews although I do read a lot of buffy fanfic, especially B/S stuff. Your fic is hillarious! I see exactly where ur coming from. Most B/S fics suck big time. Thank you for having the guts to give them the slagging they desrve. U ROCK !

This is so like much of the crap fiction out there. U shud have Spike with an over-laboured cockney accent/ Giles talking in a ridiculously complicated way as these fics piss me off the most.

omg that was like, the like, best, like, sorty i eva read! *giggle* B/S ROCKS!

*snorts* brill story mate, u hae the origionaly spuffy plot perfectly..

Oh my God, that is hilarious. I'm surprised my family hasn't had me committed to an asylum for laughing so hard. Their 'tanned bodies'? Please, keep writing. I'm a b/s fan myself, and make it a point NOT to read 'first fics' like that... The threesome thing was kinda scary though. I think a real first b/s fic woulda just killed Angel off, though... oh well. This is better.

Well I've seen many B/S fics that were extremely well written, but I have to admit, some B/S fics are just too...

Whats the word?

Verymuchlikeyourfirstchapter.

Hehe.

LOL, well I was bored with the repetitive stuff I had been reading.

crap

THat was ummmmmmmmmmm inter-est-in. maybe...nevermind i don't trust myself to speak

More more! Love it! Fantastic!

I don't know what else to say without sounding just like everyone else. :P

Idea: Go back to Giles, Willow and Xander. I miss them. I too am guilty of having Giles clean his glasses.

v.v. funny. why don't you do one dissing all the people who write songfics that have nothing to do with the story, just like moi! :) I can't help it! blame the drugs i take :)