I freakin love this story! :D It's so darn cute/hilarious at the same time! XD I really like Axels character :3 As far as ideas... Hmm... Maybe you could try for a lemon? *cringes* and after that maybe use a time skip for 2 or so months when Roxas starts showing then get him checked to see the gender and how many kids he has *cough* twins *cough, cough* Lol just a thought, hope that helps!

Update soon!
See ya!
Firerix

I needs more

Sorry, me and my curious little minds wondering... What's a flame? (:

This is epic! I'm so favoriting this! I love it! I think the 'Vampire' and the 'Rag doll' thing suits the pair too :D

haha this is so cute i love how then you carry the damn thing haha cute keep updating please

This is GREAT! x3 and for the ideas? I think you could have them go to Sally's father's house and get something done for them to be able to see what sex it is, and how many they well be having first! :D

PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOON!
I can't wait for more :( :( .(

Sorry if I don't do this right, but it's my first time reviewing. I just wanted to say that I love this fic, and I adore how you introduced the characters! Using one thing to lead to the next, storywise too! And you don't waste time with what's happening inbetween the storyline. Again, sorry if this isn't a proper review. Oh! And thanks for writing an awsome Halloween Town akuroku! There really aren't a lot of those.

Hey, maybe you can feature them around the house for a few days falling in love and then time skip to the birth? Or vise versa w/ time-skip before birth.

I really like your story, it's so different then others if you need any ideas you could pm me and I might have some

this story is so cute I wish you would continue it

Awww! So cute and hilarious, I love Axel's comment, 'Maybe next timem I will! Update soon~ xx

YOU NEED IDEAS!

I got nothin...

oh oh oh oh!

Roxas has'nt gone the the mortle world yet!

(taps nails on table and thinks)

Oogie Boogie could hear about this and assasinate the child?

you know cause if its born, then the child would be the king instead of Axel and OOGIE BOOGIE COULD GET ANGRY AND TRY TO KEEP AXEL KING INSTED(is thathow you spell it?)INSTED OF THE CHILD! YESS! IM SHMART! WAY! IN YOUR FAT FACE BROTHER LIAM! STICK THAT IN YOUR OVERGROWN PIPE AND BLOW IT! oo nice...

That was a rubbish idea, but, no, I lost my thoughts.

no,seriously,what was I on about...

why is my brother yelling at me? o-0~ clueless

btw stick that in your pipe and blow it, is sort of my catchphrase for when I have a go at a person.

yeah I'm cool 'aint I...oo

awww well if this could help, make it more scary and mean like ummm if u hate a certain charactor make them jealous that roxas has their axel and that could devolp more? sorry im no good at this

this is an amazing story. i do hope yu start working on it again