Update soon?

Thanks for updating! I really enjoy reading every new chapter. Each characters' emotions are portrayed very well. I look forward to your next chapter!

Short, sweet and to the point (as in, a well-written chapter that's not too lengthy like a lot of other fan fictions). Professional style, admirable vocabulary and genuinely interesting overall.

Excellent chapter.

I truely feel sorry for Link given the position he has been placed in, caught within the machinations of others.

Still, perhaps he can at least find some pleasure in it, being in the Princesses presence.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Nice story. I like the direction it's going in, though I do feel sorry for all the poor guards. What a shame. I'll be looking out for new chapters!

I don't know what else to say execpt that this story is very good. It is well written, and I feel as though I'm silently following the characters around. (Well, mainly Link) Very good job, I'll be looking forward to updates.

I'm really enjoying this so far. Hope you'll update soon! :)

Lovely story! May i ask how old Link and Zelda are? I like this story a lot! PLease update soon!

This story is so good! I really enjoy reading it, and I was very disappointed to find only four chapters. I hope you continue your beautiful work. I have read "Every Shard of My Heart Belongs to Thee" and I love it. It is actually one of my favorite stories worth reading twice. Wonderful job! I hope for your pront update.

very good

I think it is very realistic how you portray Link's feelings. The thoughts of failing and possibly being executed. Being demoted to nursemaid does hurt the male ego for sure. And Link's confusion as to what is truly going on. Also realistic is how Link keeps these thoughts and emotions hidden or bottled up inside.

Just wanted to let you know this is one of my favorite unfinished stories right now!

Hm, I really wonder what's behind all this rain though...

I love your writing! Beautiful! I hope Link gets un-confused soon! update.

Aww poor Link, major blow to masculinity haha, can't wait for the next chapter

Wow I loved this. I hope you update it soon. :]

Wow...this is amazing. Beautifully written. Wonderfully written. Wow. What else do I like about it...hmm...I like Link's position. I like his courtesy. he seems very much in character so far. I feel for him, being stuck at the castle and being used. Very good. The opening paragraph of this story was so boggling I had to read through it twice just to soak it all in. Congrats to your beta reader- I didn't find any typos or misspellings. Wow.