I like these little one-shots. The one about poor Mety training Kirby was my favorite so far, along with this one. I'm guessing that this one was told from Meta Knight's perspective as well?

Nice job! I look forward to seeing what else you come up with. :D

I especially enjoyed the Expectations chapter. It makes strong points about Kirby that are quite true. Keep at it! :)

i like the begin it's interesting i can't wait what happen