LOL This chapter was so playing guitar hero. Updadte soon.

Don't worry. I don't think Jack's out of character. Now, if this story took place BEFORE Lucy hugged him, then that would be entirely different. But this story takes place AFTER, so it's very feasible that he's changed.

I'm really enjoying your story - particularly this last chapter. Guitar Hero's awesome! Hard to play, though. I can't get past the easy level. Heh.

Can't wait to see what will transpire at the dance. Keep up the great work. I want to see more!

Um...This was totally OOC on Frost. But I guess it was okay considering its natural to write silly things after a writers block. Good job

I like this story a lot. And this chapter was ok. review soon.

I like this story, but I have one question ... does Jack like Danielle ? Or does Danielle like Jack ? Anyway, thumbs up, update soon :)

so good! Well written!

Lol, you're welcome for the help. I liked how you made Frost all sly and calm. Plus at the end with the "I woulda said no if I were you" "Then whyd you say yes?" "Because Im not you." thing lol.

This is really good. I am interested to find out what happens to the duo next. You keep in character very well, the story is organized, legible, and I feel that you should update it. I will review with each update, so keep up the good work!

~DWF

Lol, that was seriously interesting. However, the challenge of getting Frost to ask her out while staying in character intrigues me. I can't wait to see what you do with it!

XD they pay with candy canes? lol

update! it was great!

Pretty cute and deep

XD lmfao, yeah I spit drinks at my friends too...not b/c they make me laugh, just because its fun. Lol, very funny and cute :P Update soon

Lol, you're quite welcome. If you need help again, simply PM me. Anyway, I liked how you made it to where a snowball had to get her attention XD I was laughing at the end. Jack Frost with cocoa...

i love it!