Too many times, oh great one, have I found my self going "Awwwwwww!" At one of your stories. I DEMAND YOU STOP BEING A GOOD WRITER. Actually no... I DEMAND YOU WRITE MORE! Also I'm sorry for the leaving thousands of reviews and crowning you Rippal land Queen... Oh well :D

SWET

Luv GippalxRikku D

Keep writing !

Loves : miesie-chan

Funny thing, I didn't realize that you had written this story until after I'd read it. I promise I wasn't going through all of your stories and reading them one by one ... well, I am now; but that's beside the point.

The first thing that I would like to comment about is your writing style. It leaves me simply amazed each time. Your attention to detail, your focus on the character, and your ability to maintain an interesting plot are truly phenomenal. You have a lighthearted, almost innocent style of writing, but an ability to bring a fluffy moment quickly back to reality ... always for good reason, of course! I enjoy reading your work for many reasons, though probably the most important is that your words never stray far from the important details. I can't imagine anyone would really enjoy reading three paragraphs describing a tree; but you limit yourself to what is important and leave your reader's imaginations to do the rest of the work. Truly, that is a brilliant ability and one you seem to have mastered quite effortlessly.

This story, I must admit, I didn't like as much as Early Morning Angel, though that probably has more to do with the fact that I'm more of a fan of the almost heartbreaking moments than the happy ones. Because this story was very well written, the storyline was maintained with an interesting ferocity towards detail and truth. Even though your first story remains my favorite, this is an extremely close second place.

Perhaps what made this story stick most in my mind, however, were the characters. I felt like Gippal was himself and Rikku herself; their relationship was sarcastic and teasing, just like I've always thought it should be. For all I know, they could have both just walked out of the video game and into your story; they were damn convincing.

Once again, thank you for sharing an amazing story. All my best to you and I'll be reading more fiction by you in the future!

bahahha.. you are a wonderful writer.

i am inspired :)

AH! So amazing! Great job!

aw so so so sweet. i loved it. :)

That was cute, but now I must go to sleep and get back up in...six hours...I hate work...

this is such a cute story D

props to you.

AWE! I luv it! soo much. I always loved Rikku&Gippal together :) woot! lolz, update son XP

Aww that was sweet! Really great i loved it!

This fic is great! Light-hearted, plenty of emotion, and enough fluffiness to keep your heart from breaking. Excellent.

But I do have my gripes:

1. Yuna, at the end, is rather OOC... I think it would make more sense if, say, Paine said that... or even Brother... (shifty eyes)

2. The ending, in my opinion, had a rather tacked-on approach. It didn't really gel with the rest of the story.

But anyways, keep up the good work!

8.5/10

i loved it!

I especially loved when Yuna said, "Get a room! More appropriately, get TWO rooms."

hahaha i was dying of laughter.

So sweet! I'm so glad it all worked out for Rikku in the end! I can't begin to imagine how horrible it must've felt to have her most precious possession stolen. Gippal made me giggle though, especially the “Mad? Baby, I’ve been trying to lure you into my romantic clutches since you were fifteen.” line. THAT was priceless. And probably oh so true, hehe. Very nicely written!