great story i loved it!

hey sorry i dident revew earlyer but ive been too enthroled with this story so far it is really goood. just watch your spelling and thing is to not rush things in your story. rember to put in lots of detail. anny ways great story so far and i am sorry about your ankel it probably happened along time agoe but i hope nothing is wrong with you (medical wise) and hope that you are feeling well.
well untill next time!
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From what I recall sesshomaru is a full demon. And it's spelled 'heir'.

I'm guessing he's a dig again, right?

So he what? Kissed her? I gotta read this stuff more thoroughly. Lovin' the story by the way!

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I'm pretty sure this fanfiction is pretty much based off of a fanfic I recently read called 'On a leash' ... :(

oh this is so sweet

Ok. Ok. I'm over my shock. Ahahaha. I just died laughing at the Miroku ganster walk. He is the TRUE P.I.M.P. Ahaha. I could see him doing it in my head.

And I'm kinda confused. In the first chapter...you said that Kikyo had hurt him as a dog. And now it's like he doesn't even know her.

And his personality has changed so much. Like when they kid had picked on him in the class. InuYasha shakes his head o.o

I'd think he'd growl or something.

This is a great story.

Err...

Miroku...gangster walk?

InuYasha's...big...brother... -eye twitches-

Mentally, sure. Physically in any form...no.

Oh gosh...

o.o

I love how you made everyone. Esp. Inuyasha.

Love it!

Aha. Classic. Kay's falling in love with her dog.

Love it!

Uh oh. Sounds like fun! :D

Love this!

Very good so far.

Great story Sammy! Thanks for getting me obsessed with Twilight!