this was way entertaining to read and absolutely loved it lol perfect example of how Hilary would be with her 'boys'

I love this story hahahah This is really fun xD
It's so interesting to see how overprotective they became for her, and it's great so see how well you could develop it in this fanfic. And I don't know if you did this on purpose, but I couldn't help but feel delighted at the TysonxHilaryxKai hints here.
I only think you could have made it more clear how each one of them appreciates her in his own special way, but all in all you did a very good job in this story :D

haha i loved it

That was hilarious! Absolutely amazing - I loved each boy's reaction and how well it fitted them personality-wise. The whole idea was great, and it's well-written. The description is pretty much flawless (I couldn't find anything in the way of errors) and it flows nicely. The length is good, too. The dialogue was fantastic, and made me laugh. I don't think there's anything negative to say about this at all.

Really nice story!

KO xoxo

ok that was hilarious! i felt really sorry for tsuneo...now i will never leave my date alone in a room full of bladebreakrs...keep writing it rox!

loved it!

Really funny story, I absoulutely loved it!

Poor hil, i can imagine her pain, oh well i really liked the fic, hope u write a follow-up.

I love you! (hugs) so awsome write more! protecive bro's of hiromi! (squeals) to awsome!

and did max make me laugh jebus all that yelling so cute and random! and and ray all have her back by 11 with kai all Or ill brake your back... and tyson so funny with kenny checking the info! daichi could have jumped on him...that would have so worked lmao!

Love the story!

Hmm, you know I'm pretty disappointed. I thought this was such a great story (really one of my favourites... mostly because I can relate to it XD), and I'm surprised that there aren't that many reviews for it... So that's why I'm giving you one ). You should really continue writing. You have talent!

oh my gosh! Your first fic? Dangg. It was really, really good. i loved reading it. i loved the plot. it was a brilliant topic D. teehee. too cutee. i didn't get why punky-boy kept looking over his shoulder till right at the end. hysterical. i hope to read more from youu.

-AJ.

hey. i just wanted to say you did an excellent job! i really enjoyed this one, especially since i hadn't been keeping up with all the beyblade fanfiction. I was expecting to be disappointed or bored, but i honestly enjoyed this one a LOT. keep writing! i was surprised it was your first one.

Write another one soon, please! kind of like a spin off of this one... the story would be like the same thing, only this time, it's with a guy the guys cant help but approve of...maybe some other beyblader? you decide. :)

oh my god! cute...

w I haven't read something so cute in such a long time. Thanks for making my day!

please, write more!

that was so funny, i laughed my pants off!...CRAP. forgot what i was supposed to say next...but anyway, loved it! WRITE MORE. and...good job in keeping them in character. XDD