| Reviews for The Long and Winding Road |
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   David Fishwick chapter 12 . 6/24/2009 Brilliant and I liked how you wrote Narcissa. Thanks for writing. |
| me chapter 4 . 5/24/2009 ok, so I'm confused. I'm on the 4th chapter so maybe it'll make sense later, but what is up with Narcissa's apparent schizophrenic behavior towards Lucius? Love, hate, love, hate, love, hate. It's sorta weirding me out. I don't even understand how you're trying to portray her. Sigh. Tis interesting so far though. And I like how you show Bellatrix. |
| Morning. xx chapter 12 . 3/18/2008 I must admit that I'm not a fan of the drabble-style paragraphs etc, but I really like this fic. My favorite chapter is the last one, because it's a grandmother's point of view, and it shows Narcissa as a kindly old woman. |
| Morning. xx chapter 9 . 3/18/2008 Albus Wulfric Percival Brian Dumbledore |
| Bad Mum chapter 7 . 2/27/2008 really interesting seeing this from the "other" point of view, so that Voldemort's defeat is a disaster not a victory. Good job. |
| fauves chapter 12 . 2/27/2008 Aww thanks mustard! I love you too! You're one of my favourite person too! Anyway, back on to the long and winding road with the story. I LOVED the ending, and I'm pretty sure this is my favourite chapter. I like the way you really expressed Cissy's character through the photographs, and the use of your title at the end really emphasizes you really thought deep into the story. I loved the last sentence too, 'On the whole, I like where I've ended up - Paradise." Very deep, you know that? Well, it is! D Pinky_x |
| fauves chapter 10 . 2/20/2008 Really good chapter, Lola. Update soon (I mean the 12th chapter!) Pinky x XD o.O |
| fauves chapter 11 . 2/20/2008 Oh. That was sad. Though I didn't exactly understand who Allison, Belle, and nameless child were. Pinky x XD o.O |
| Ky-lassassin chapter 2 . 2/18/2008 Ooh. Somehow, I don't see Andromeda calling Cissy a "filthy little Slytherin", though I do believe she would have snapped at the family. Other than that, good job! I liked it, especially the Bella parts. ~ Kyota |
| Ky-lassassin chapter 1 . 2/18/2008 You portrayed Cissy really well! I love how she would imitate Andi and Bella and then she actually *became* like them. ~ Kyota |
| lalababee chapter 10 . 2/15/2008 great job! i think this is my fav. chapter! update soon! |
| lalababee chapter 9 . 2/15/2008 great job! yea, u did get the name right, but i think Wulfric comes b4 brian. update soon! |
| lalababee chapter 8 . 2/15/2008 hey great job! cant wait for an update! |
| fauves chapter 9 . 2/7/2008 "Bloody phoenix" heehe! ) Thanks for all the reviews Lola! In my RL challenge, you are TOTALLY DA best! D Pinky x XD o.O PS. Update soon! |
| weirdandhappy chapter 9 . 2/6/2008 Nice! |
