Aaah. I will never get tired of rereading this thing.

9/10

Holy *fuck*. What an ending. What a god damn glorious ending. Emotional satisfaction, dramatic pay off, and one hell of a twist. He spoke! Myers spoke! Mr. Speaks with his eyes sad his first words, and its a fucking Han Solo quote lmao.

I'm so glad they got their happy ending. I'm so glad we got to it without too much more murder. And I'm so glad Emory and Myers had their happy ever after. Man, what a ride, Aj. What a bloody good ride.

This is me signing off. Sorry I didn't review the sad end. That stuff sticks to me hard and I wanna end on a high note. Until next time, aj, love you!

FUCK. FUCKFUCKFUCK.

GOD DAMN IT BONNIE. GOD DAMNIT IT MYERS. GOD DAMNIT.

*POUNDS HEAD AGAINST DESK*

YOU WERE ALL SO CLOSE TO A HAPPY ENDING T-T

Ahhhh, Myers noooo! No matter how much Emory is trying to make him stop, he keeps going over and over again. You can't stop Micheal, you can't! God, what is he doing to Bonnie? Why is he facing her? Fuck I hope he doesn't kill her. Fuck I hope she doesn't kill him!

What a fucking night it must be from the strodes' perspective. A lady barges in saying Michael Myers is about to fucking clock you, then he crashed through your door in the next second. Then said lady stands her ground like Ash protecting pikachu from the fearow, and then you're out. The only thing that would've made that night even weirder is if myers kissed emory before knocking them out, just to add more to the fever dream.

But in all seriousness, what a chapter! Emotions running high, suspense to the conclusion! I'm so glad myers didn't kill the strodes in the end, and I'm glad that he and Emory could see eye to eye. I'm concerned about why Myers knocked emory out though? To protect her once the police arrive? I hope he's not planning on taking the fall ;-;

Emory's thought process is always just a treat to read. How the dots logically connect her mind, like when she woke up and went from "cold" to "michael is gone". You could almost hear her just have the gears turning in her head. Awesome. And man, you just really sell Emory and her not-so-stable side well. It's something that isn't just tacked onto her like other attempts at "crazy" characters, but something that's an interconnected piece of her personality.

This chapter in general was another great one in terms of mood and suspense, and man, I really hope emory and michaels get back on the same page :c

Oooh, nice parallels between Emory and Myers with their nightmares. Myers' addition of Emory to his repeating nightmare was especially interesting, how quickly she's become important to him.

I'm going to admit, I was really worried that Myers would barge into his old home and kill some strangers/homeless now living there. Thankfully the only thing he ended up killing was the flooring lmao.

Another really amazing chapter, capturing Myers' just unbelievable emotion and raw *power*. Christ he feels like a super human sometimes.

Got farther into the chapter this time thankfully, right to when he brought her to the bed and kissed her.

Man, you're really capturing the turmoil of emory here well. I guess her plan was to simply let Myers go, but we can clearly see that it's incredibly difficult for her to go through with it. She legitimately wants to be with myers, even if common sense says no :P

God Emory is so smart. The way she plans and adapts, knowing exactly what's she's going for and how to execute it is just fucking splendid to watch. And god, that choice of mask though? Freudian slip much?

I honestly have no idea where this can end though, beyond tragedy. I mean, unless Emory and Myers run away to live in a Cabin in the woods.

They're going to go live in a cabin in the woods arent' they

"She was a reasonably sane person."

NO YOU AIN'T LMAO.

Another transitional plan. Emory is very focused on her plan to help micheal, but what about herself? How will she survive this? I've suddenly realized the Harley/Joker mood to all this, except Myers is less of an abusive asshole as the joker.

See, it's such a great piece of writing that even with skipping the, uh, topic of the previous chapter, I was still totally able to understand everything, without you completely just explaining what's going on again. The position of the two's relationship at this point is clear and well understood (to the audience, not to them lmao), and we keep that quick and concise pacing towards where the plot is headed. Another great chapter! :D

Right, So I read up to the showers line and then read the very last one. Apologizes again but I just can't handle smut in nearly all circumstances ;-;

What I did read was, holy shit, *terrifying*. Emory does not have all her marbles we can say,

Ooooh, now a turning point of the plot, where Emory is posed with the opportunity of everything at the risk of losing everything. Now, however, she has to put up with loomis's bullshit until he retires. You could write a whole fic on this stretch of time alone, though I think you''re going to speed through it to get to more juicy details of her relationship with Myers.

I'm so curious to see where this goes.

And now a jump back to Emory's perspective, her take on the encounter. I will admit the joy she takes in fucking with Loomis is very endearing. I want a shirt that says "Fuck Loomis" now, with no context.

An interesting thing I noticed that Emory's and Myers' trains of thought are very similar, how they run through questions in their head and all that. Emory and Myers' contrast each other in their presence on screen (in text?), but perhaps they compare as well. Only time (and more binge reads) can tell.

Great Chapter!