"Mum!" it was ok,but it needs a ending that work for it try a bate that end (Good or Bad) way!

I loved Vinyáya's mischievousness! Not what I would have expected from her (for some reason, I imagined her as being in the same position as Holly, with Foaly and Caballine orchestrating the whole scheme) but I adored it anyway! Double thumbs up!

As you know by now I am completely useless when it comes to ideas so that is why my reviews aren't exactly original but oh well. fNot the the point. SO cute, I loved this, was the whole bomb thing a set-up or was that just a convenient wat for them to get together?

TPJ!

I LOVE this! I'm not sure that Holly can really call someone an 'old lady' when she's like a hundred or something. I love christmas stories, there's so sweet! I have to read on now I'm sorry.

TPJ!

aw. they're so cute.. like anime! except... smaller... and there's a larger possibility that they're actually real. which would be awesome, of course.

“and please remember that if you can’t disarm this bomb I’m going to be the one standing above it when it goes off.”

I found that pretty funny.

I am

Major Trouble

That was such a sweet little fic, if you ignore the bomb and suicidy guy. But I loved it. Great job.

Thats a very sweet, nicely wrapped-up fic. I

This was great!

your havig a proble with the second capter gal i can''t get on

Aw, so sweet. ;)

Fave. ;)

i have one word for you my friend... SEQUIL! lol. i loved it! i think the best part was Trouble catching Holly.

Oh, I loved that! So sweet and funny! Really well written too. Holly and Trouble were really in character. My only qualm is that sometimes your punctuation is a little off, but that's it. Otherwise, a great story!