IF NO ONE WAS AROUND I'D BE BALLING

FLAILING AND SOBBING I LOVE IT! I can't wait to read more! I know you haven't written this since like 2007 but you STILL deserve the compliment!

I love this pairing! I like anything rhat has this in it (though you do have some typing errors)

the only thing i have to say iss that saying flashback is kinda weird when you use italics also

This was a beautiful story. I loved it as much as The Queens Waltz. Its cool you wrote stories for my 2 favorite games! :D I like how you didn't insult Kaiden through the whole story. Almost every Garrus Fanfic out there, they are always so mean to him. He's one of my favorite characters next to Tali and Garrus. You are a great author! :D

Thank you, Voi, for seeing this through to the end. It was great, but now I'm afraid to read anything else you've written for fear it will pale by comparison.

There are a few places in Chapter 13 that could use a bit of spit and polish, as it were, with missing -ly and -ing and such. Other than that, though, I'm completely satisfied with the work you've done. Thank you for sharing it. :)

I have read only the 1st chapter, and already I am hooked to this!

I WILL DEFINATELY enjoy reading more of this!

;)

And it's over! :O

Can't wait for the next

-MAIIW

Sad face :(

Guess that explains why she's a soldier.

Still, I'm surprised she didn't just shoot his crotch when she first saw him.

-MAIIW

Uh oh :D

Since it's late and I'm too lazy to do stuff that's due in a day...

I'm reading :D Be glad it's your story! o

-MAIIW

:D It has begun!

and :O oh snap someone walked in!

You've probably heard this all before considering this is an old story of yours, but I figured you'd enjoy a first reaction review :D

-MAIIW

:O

I am so hooked.

I'm a bit new to Mass Effect, which is weird because for two years I've missed out on all of this awesomeness X silly me.

Hope there's still time to correct the mistake with fanfiction :D Loving it so far!

-MAIIW

My goodness... This is simply an amazing fanfiction. I can clearly see the thought, love, and careful work that you have put into this fanfic. You've beautifully painted a romance between Garrus and Shepard, amazingly, without either of them dropping out of character or doing anything that pulled me out of the telling of the story. I was on the edge of my seat, blushing and crying as I read your whole work in one sitting. This was the romance I wished for in the game, and your writing is clearly linked to the game world, worthy of a BioWare writer. There were a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there, but they were nothing major, and didn't affect the readability very much. I rarely see fanfictions of this level. Thank you very much for writing this work of art.

Specifically, I love how you portrayed Garrus's gentleness, and wove their relatioship as something very pure, quietly loving, and gentle, not something driven by selfishness or lust, as fanfic parings often are. Your use of direct quotes from the game with your own twist on them was highly enjoyable to read. (I laughed at the fact that your Shepard was very much like my own as far as backstory choices and hair/eye colors.)

I know it's selfish to ask this, and demanding of your time... but, please... would you consider continuing writing once Mass Effect 2 comes out?

I mean it from my core as a reader when I say that this is, truly, an amazing work.

wow. just finished the 4th chapter (don't have time to read it all in one sitting), and I'm getting seriously drawn into the story the further I go. I especially like the depth of the characters. I've been meaning to write a Mass Effect fanfic myself, but my resolve keeps waffling so I just stick with my kotor ones...

so good, i love the ending. made me cry.