i'm crying after reading this please make more storys.

love it awesome

love this story in my top 5 your now number 2 please keep writing.
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I'm sorry even through it sounds really good i can not read your story with out spaces i really dislike the lay out for REAL! i do like the story but your lay out is just i HATE IT if you could just change the lay out but i don't think you would. even through good luck with your story

Hi didn't really read your story. its coz how it is layed out when i was reading the entry it sounded good but now when i see it i don't think i can read it but it really does sound good only if you can change the lay out through and make spacese as well PS your story DOES sound good

Aw that was so sweet i loved it!

Ilovethis story! that was so emotional! i feel like crying!

I loved it even if it was only 4 chapters

It really made me cry at the ending

Amazing job!

Wow! your really good at capturing your readers. I read half of your story last night. Then my parents made me go to bed. It was so good I had to find it again this morning and read the rest! It was wonderful! Keep up the great work.

Thats a really good story for just 4 chapters...you really are a great writer...keep up the good work...so I can check out the other storys you are going to or already have written )

such a cute storyy! lovedd it!

wow this was good...nice job...i love your attention to detail and feeling...keep it up

that was a wonderful story!

I love the story, but the ending... No. I'm really sorry, but I just don't buy the whole scenario.

oh wow! so awesome!