THE ACTRESSES NAME IS yVONNE STRAHOVSKI

Absolutely amazing and beautiful story. I really loved it from start to finish. Just fantastic. Thank you so much for sharing this with us

Still enjoying this story but have a couple more notes. Watch your verb conjugations, you confused a few of the say/said conjugates in this chapter. Also the phrase is '...ducks in a row' not '...in a roll."

Enjoying the fic, but have a small note. Spell out Christmas.

This would have been fun to see on film

Enjoying your story. If I could write, you would get a really elegant review commenting on the sound plot and characters

Not sure how I missed this one, but it's really good. It has just enough angst to make it interesting, and lots of fluff too.

Wow! That is really all I can say about your story is just wow. I fell in love with this story from the moment I started reading.

Interesting.

Chuck is an ass to Sarah. Sarah refuses to talk to Chuck.

Then they decide to fuck.

More of Dickhead Chuck.

Nope. Nope. Nu-uh. I'm going to try and be as not-angry as I can in this, but I'm so furious and disgusted with this chapter. I couldn't even finish it.

Because Chuck is a fuckhead. A complete, total assbag.

He's putting his dick in another woman, and he has the gall to give Sarah shit WHILE ON A MISSION about kissing a dude for her job?

Jesus.

What a pile of shit. What a whiny pile of garbage. "Wahh, I'm still into you even if I said we should just be friends and I'm plowing another lady but now you got smeared lipstick and it might mean you kissed some dude even though we're here for matters of national security so I'm gonna throw a hissy fit-and now I've been shot."

So I'm angry at Chuck, and while I'm not angry with you, dear author, I'm so disappointed. I was bummed that Chuck would so easily start banging another woman so quickly - I thought he, as a person, was better than that, and I thought his attraction to Sarah was stronger. But hey, I could get past it because I knew Chuck would get past this and get with Sarah legit.

And I was enjoying the story quite well (even despites mis-steps with your lame cliffhanger between chapters revealing Sarah's Christmas gift, your insistence on spelling it XMas the whole story, and Morgan's out-of-character complete "Hey Chuck, your girlfriends totally bangin' I got her this lingerie for everyone to see") but then you made Chuck so thoroughly unlikable. Seriously. He's a piece of garbage.

Maybe when I calm down, I'll finish this.

If nothing else, I was really digging Chapters 1 through 7.

What a wonderful heartwarming story! I found this from atcDave's recommendations on the ChuckThis blog site and it was well worth the read!

I'm a little surprised you were a big enough fan to write a fic but forgot Yvonne's name but that could have been way early in the Chuck stages and she wasn't as well known back then.

I like this story, but all of the "Xmas" usage is driving me crazy. Either everyone in your story says "X"mas, or you're using shorthand for Christmas. If its just shorthand, you shouldn't use shorthand in a story. If its your characters actually saying "x"-mas... I could understand chuck or Morgan using the slang, but everyone?

Nicely done. Good epilogue, particularly the scene with Bryce. I think you did a good job keeping everyone in character.

Loved it especially the epilogues that weren't all slam jammed into writing them married and babies into one chapter but more separate stories that really tied the whole story to a great, sweet and homey close. Really enjoyed reading this story.