I know it a finished story but it's so good and you got to make this story longer then it already is.

Lovely. Wonderful piece, and I like the original character. A deal with Calypso? Great idea.

Intriguing! Your OC wasn’t as much of a Mary Sue as I expected her to be. Bit of a brat, I think. But NOT a Mary Sue.

Good job!

OH, me likey.

I absolutely LOVE this! What a coincedence...my name is Michelle! And to top it off I love Norrington...! I know its crazy but i have tendency to fall for fictional characters! Anywho well written! Merry Christmas!