I don't believe that this story just stop in here

Nooooo! I can't believe it stops here. This story was so great, everything about from the family moments, to the hilarious fluff moments. There was plenty of action and the fight scenes were excellent. Yet, there was still many light-hearted moments that provided a break from the action. Most importantly, this was an exception NaruHina story, their relationship was natural and it wasn't so fluff. The story while not completed, I guess did end okay, if you rewind a chapter or two, but still, it was getting even better. Every chapter improved over the last. Hopefully, one day this will be resurrected.

Him removing the seal was way more intense in this story then the canon scene. It makes sense though, given his relationship with Hinata. Just watching the scene with him becoming like Sasuke and obsessed with destroying Pein, sent shivers down my spine. His emotions were portrayed very well, and I think the fact that he meets both his mom and dad at the same time may be better than just meeting them separately. Honestly, I can't wait to see how his sister will react to not only seeing him in full rage mode, but after battle when he has met his parents.

I think you made good use of Gaara, since he didn't go with Naruto for Sage training, but I'm curious to see what would have happened if he did. I can just imagine a badass looking Naruto and Gaara, both wearing cloaks, facing the Six Paths of Pein (okay, someone just has to commission this picture).

I think one of the things I enjoyed about this story the most, is kind of the family bonds that Naruto has created, since the last book (first story). His relationship with Gaara and Neji is especially interesting. Also, I like the concept of him becoming a seal master to surpass his father and Jiraiya. On a final note, this chapter perfectly summarized the sage training arc, I was a bit afraid if that was suppose to take 3-4 chapters, but it looks like it's coming to an end in just one.

As always your fight scenes are fast paced, great length, and exciting. The fight between Sasuke/Naruto and Gaara/Naruto both ended nicely. I felt like you made a fair use of their abilities, especially the Rasengan and Chidori.

I guess training with Naruto for 3 years would certainly affect Gaara's personality. He is hilarious, and the prank him and Naruto pulled on Suna was just perfect. I almost died when he made the Itcha Itcha billboard using the frog summon henge for the Jonin exam. Gaara becoming a Leaf-nin was the best thing that has ever happened.

This is a great start to the story so far. Especially the scene with Naruto visiting Asuma.

Just done reading this story and your first story (Naruto Part 1).

They are both great stories, you have done great work.
It's a shame you couldn't finish this story because i found it a real pleasure to read it. I've already read a lot of fanfic's, especially of NaruHina, but this story is by far the best i've read until this point. I hope you could finish this story some time, but you can surely be proud of what you've written!

Greatings from a Belgian fan

Hisoka316,
I enjoy your story and would like to know when the next chapters are going to come out? It has been 15 years since you promise that chapter 20 will becoming soon and it has not reached. Also I think I remember reading at the end of one of the chapters that you plan to do a rewrite. However, shouldn't you notify your readers how that is going so that they don't lose faith in you. I am tired of good stories that good authors and writing and can never complete them for one reason or the other. I know that our personal lives take precedence over everything, but still if you promise to do something you should keep your promise.

OMG SUCH AMAZING

Hey, hey, hey, hey! I know Naruto's taken but this still feels like a harem. The four tails jinchuruki is not a girl but a boy.
Sigh...

Hello hisoka big fan I'm wondering if you can make a harem thank you.

UPDATE YOU FUCKER

is it just me or does naruto look hot in sage mode (dont worry kiba i still love you and hinata i leave naruto in your safe hands "good luck")