wonderfully written. thank you.

I love it! :)

Nice angsty feel. the last bit wasn't as intense as i thought it would be, but the romantic feel made up for it. I liked this peice.

wow. this was fantastic. loved the last sentence. very cute .

truly beautiful. i thought sasuke would say something like 'so?' when she said she loved him. but this is way better. sweet.

great work. an angsty story with a happy ending D

aw:(

depressing..

i lubb it...

Interesting))

aw...so cute! now i want that to happen in the manga! think it will happen: no. BUT IT SHOULD! tee hee!

Shit! this is...whoah! i love you dani-chan! you are my new idol! rock on, dude!

Oi, so cute...

wow. that was cute ]

"politically correct"? ~please~. That only works for a select few, because you've just gone and told people to have a happy *holy*day. Not that I'm trying to be pretentious or anything... *shiftyeyes*

"that you have always loved her and kept her away to save her, protect her, keep her untainted. But you can see, now, in her eyes, that in your sick form of protection you have only hurt her, harmed her, tainted her."

That is *so* the thing I'm thinking of whenever I hear he was only trying to protect her... heh.

But then you follow it up with that next ~wonderful~ line and I just have to go "aww" and think 'yes. no excuses in his brain. wewt.' Although... perhaps with more emphasis, perhaps not. heh.

umm...

Have a nice day! -

I love it!So cute and beautiful!

OH MY GOD. That was beautiful. Don't ever stop writing SasuSaku, like, ever. That's exactly the way I want it to happen when Sasuke is brought back to Kohona. EXACTLY.

Are you some sort of mind reader?

Ah, so that's what the title meant! Very, very clever :D

I liked it and you give Sasuke legitimate reasons for his actions and you keep him nice and in character.

Keep writing :D