a great story but the only thing that i don't like is that it took over a month for shepperds wound to heal i had 13 fragments in my chest during the siege of baghdad and it took 2 weeks to get back in the fight. other than that great story.

It was good but there were a few things that could of changed

First the replicator ships were not made from replicator blocks they are real metal. The atlantis replicatory cant make ships like that there not able to merge to geather.

You said I love you to much lol

I liked the idea of the gravity stablizers but it dosent fit with the end of s3

The Earth ships Can blow through the Replicator ships with ease. Watch 4x11

Other than that it was a very good read.

You had a few mistypes. You said theyed beam the explosives on a relpiacotr ship not a hive the first one.

I bleive that they were going to make atlantis move a week befor it happen you kept changing the time on it.

Anyways it was a good read, Keep up the good work.

mile time 4:05! O.o good for him.

'He could also tell a few other things that went on during the night, but Atlantis, slightly shaking with mirth, blocked that from him once he asked it to.'

*giggles* definately add some one liners in like this in your next story - your good at that :)

*sigh* i think i melted at the sparky scene :)

scratch that i melted at the Rodny/Katie scene. i love you so much for that! and i liked how you ended it. that he should have hugged her, but didn't. its very Rodney like.

this chapter was really funny i enjoyed it:D

The last two chapters were a great way to tie everything up. I loved the Sam/Daniel friendship you threw in there, and I love that almost everyone got a happy ending. I'm a sucker for a happy ending. I can't wait til you have another story!

Ok im all excited so i have just a *few* things to say (lol yeah right!) Daniel and Vala - so cute! Sam Jack! loving the shippy tie ups! (Ek! RINGS! yay! and Teal'c and Daniel LOL they are too funny) the cam sparky scene was defintaely my favorite. sad but so so sweet. loved it. loved the way you wrote this chapter. very interesting with Woolsey...but yay for him! and yay for Paul Davis! and im loving excalation points right now! you deserve twenty! more than twenty! interesting how they are back on Earth for a bit :) so what happened to Ronon and Teyla? back with the Athosians? omg the ending with Brian Laura and Carson..just so perfect. thats all i can say. yes definately needs an epilogue! cause i cant get enough and i want more sparky - of course! i cant wait! Thanks so much for this story, it made me extremely happy :)

Thanks for the shout out! *tackle hugs* this is just an amazing story, i'll be sorry to see it end. On your next fic i'll be happy to be support again ;)

A quick little correction: Sumner's first name is Marshall, he says so in the first episode. Thought you'd want to know.

Excellent story. I need not say more.

Yay for updating! I'm slightly confused as to who has actually died...I probably just haven't been paying enough attention. Are Weir and Vala and Cam dead? I'm hoping some happiness comes out of this soon.

thanks :)

hm interesting plan there :) so this fic is almost over then? i thnk im gona miss it :)

i loved the scene with Brians sis, im really starting to like OCs be/c of you - as long as they dont get with a main character cause that would completely ruin my ships! lol

aww that was a really nice bot of friendship with Ronon and Rodney

ooh ok. poor john? and poor everyone else. seriously.

“I can smell the promotions all around.” He took a deep breath dramatically. “Delicious.” LOL

lovely last scene. Laura is funny - that was a nice touch. :)

brilliant story! i haven't read anything this good for ages! plez finish it quickly!

NO! I LOVE Lorne! *Sniff* this sucks...no offense, I mean I get how it adds to the story...but still! Not gonna say any more on that subject..

Anyhoo, I love Chuck! Wow, his creative *skills* make him so funny! Really, you did an excellent job with him!

Oh yes, and I am still loving the 'ships because the way you have played them out is sweet and funny and just perfect. So nice job so far (other than the Lorne thing *tear*) and keep up the excellent work! Kudos on mastering so many characters!

Ok, so reviewing as i read: (and a bit worried by the AN)

LOL Chuck, Rodney, and Lorne (who is so gonna die, right? i just know it! *fit of hysterics*) are funny. And Sam and Jack are the sweetest.

hmm...i think have to go back a few chapters, im kinda lost. lol thats just me :)Oh wait! i rememebr now! :D

but of course Elizabeth is there! ;) that was a sweet scene.

But...no...no...NO! it *is* him!

You just...he...but...NO! *sobs* and he had a kid too! i cant believe hes...hes...*sniff* i really really liked him.

what a sad scene. and Rodney just *had* to ask 'Where's Lorne?'

:( :_(

Chuck apprenticed under Siler? *sniff* lol, cute. *sniff* And daniels funny. Nice way to end it. Good chapter, I do see why it had to be done...*sniff* but im not happy about it! *pouts*

dod this is crazy.

my name is brian leeds.

word.

what a trip.

Reading the beginning part with Carson seemes incredibly sad. All i can say is you write very well.

Oh tretonin! didnt think of that!

Nice chapter. All the medical stuff. Sadly it needs to be shown. Some Sparky next chapter maybe? please? yeah? *grin*

Yay for SG1! I miss the old SG1 so much. I don't know if I've told you how happy I am that you've put them ( and Jack/Sam) in the story. John's hearts desires were heartbreaking too, especially when you consider he may never get them. I can't imagine what he would have to live with if she died during the battle. Thanks for updating!