That was awesome, I loved it and great job

Your poem was sweet and excellent, nice job

You sure English isn't your native tongue? Your writing is exceptional.

i love the poem you wrote...very good

its so...special, i like it XD

Ah, this is one of those fics that have a certain depth in them. So pretty, almost made me cry. We really need more stories like this.

i liked this fic it was very believable i wish u would make it longer tho.

Oh wow, that was just beautiful. I would never have guessed English isn't your native language! I loved the poem too.

You have a fabulous way with words, the images you created were just so..wow

Love it!

Beautiful! That was the perfect ByaRen Christmas fic I've read so far.. _ Congratulations for a job well done!

it's 1:30 am christmas morning (couldn't sleep) and I called my writing partner to read her your story and she agrees with me that it's wonderful. Af and I both love your turn of phrase and you have a good grasp of the english language we only saw one blip and that was just a spacing error *smile* instead of Asymbol it's A symbol(spelling isn't our forte that's why microsoft created spellchecks) we love it and look foreward to more of your work

Ryshandra and Afrieal

barldings in training (and rabid yaoi fangirls)