I doubt the story will be updated again, but I followed just in case. This has been a fun time waster. Thanks! I would've given more reviews in previous chapters, but I couldn't wait to read the next part.

Great job please continue the story

PFFFFFFT

That excuse for lateness tho. It's a bad idea to read that line in public spaces. Too funny not to look like an idiot lol

Lmao divine intervention at its best

I just stumbled across your fantastic story! :D I love the idea and the Characters though changed feel so real. I hope college is going well for you. I realize it's been almost 10 yesterday it seems since the last update but I'm hopeful to see where it goes. It's a very delightful drift from cannon. Thank you so much for writing it.

somehow i doubt it, but are u still seeking that beta?

Why isn’t there an ending?!

Wow I'm proud of myself I binged the whole story in one day

...then again I'm not sure if I really should be proud

This is a great story I hope you'll continue it in the near future

Just imagining Naruto getting really mad with the kyuubi cloak and shocking everyone then boom zabuza hits him in the head with his sword and he faints is just...ded. I'm ded.

NO I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT MA'M

Lmfao you made zabuza hilarious! good job I love this

punched a wall at the last line.

This is really hard to follow. The way you wrote it is just incredibly confusing as you allude to a lot of the information and refuse to outright give it to us. It's just riddles and complex inferences using empty words. A lot of it feels forced and doesn't flow well.

That's not to say I don't like the story, because for some reason I do.