Wow. That was REALLY well written. This may be the story that leads to me becoming obsessed with Transformers, haha. So I've only seen the movies, and I used to watch Beast Wars but I don't really know that much about the series, but I've always been interested...so that just blew my mind. Totally awesome, very nicely done.

I don't like to favorite without reviewing. I like to let the author know what I liked about thir work.

So. Am I crazy for using the word 'sweet' to describe this fic?

I'm not really into the rape, it's a touchy subject and yes . . . . but I couldn't resist.

Now. I like Jazz. Great character. I liked him in G1 and Animated. Soundwave has been one of my favorite characters since I got into Transformers. I never thought to pair the two or even look at them together. But. I've been reading IDW's Transformers All Hail Megatron and I have to say. I love Soundwave. Kinda hot. But then on a whim . . . yadda yadda. Stumbled upon Soundwave and Jazz. Huh~zah!

Back to your fic. I'm definately not into the male pregnancy thing and It's really . . . . odd? It was easy to ignore the mentions of it, but at the end I kinda sped read through that chunk. Other that that. I liked it.

The fact that Jazz wasn't necessarily a warrior and a fighter but an artist and a musician.

And Soundwave's fixation and love? Great.

Sex. Great.

But I think my favorite part was the post sex. When Soundwave took a step back and actually looked at Jazz. It was sad. But like I said, sweet. And then for him to lock Jazz to everyone but him. I saw it initially as sweet but then again that could be a bad thing . . . but . . . . Jazz may see it as a good thing eventually?

-Crim

sequel please?

Wow, I liked it! Poor Jazz... He's gona have a hard time, knowing he's pregnant because of an abused bonding... and I also feel a little sorry for Soudwave, he really love Jazz but he couldn't do it any other way...

I'd like to read a sequel to this story, really!

OMG Poor Jazz...poor Soundwave...I'm not sure who i should feel sorry for but I have to say well done...that was one heck of a fic! Well done! I love Soundwave and Jazz!

This felt like a combination of sticky and plug 'n play though.

Anyway, I liked it. I take it Jazz is pretty much preggers from 'Wave's intrusion.

You might want to brush upon your grammar though... some of the sentences were too long or very confusing. I had to go back and reread a few times.

Aww man you need to make a sequal or something. I want to know what happens to Jzz. Will there be Soundwave/Jazz pairing?

Please finish.

Wowie, this has got to be one of, if not THE best, robot smut I have ever read. Definately in my top 3.

Excellent job, please write more.

very well wrtitten! sad, and angsty like I like

Oh! I feel all squirming after reading this.

Wonderful job by the way. It’s a very interesting AU and outlook on Cybertronian physiology.

that is so sad... Poor Jazzy

Jazz...

*hugs*

Shh...

It's gonna be alright, baby.

I gotcha now, shh...

Looks much as expertly writing to me who enjoyed the story.

I hope there are a sequeal!

This was is wonderfully written and has a good plot along with smutty delight: what more can one ask for? Truthfully I enjoyed this fic very much, it's a nice change to see Jazz as only a musician and not a high ranking autobot and also it's nice to see that his charms can get him other mechs other than Prowl (whom is nice and all but a bit of diversity never hurt anyone) be they unwanted or not.

Soundwave being obsessive seems so IC to me, thumbs up on that too.

A on this fic dear, hope to see more of this couple (and maybe even this AU?) from you in the future. Any chances of that happening?

that was very good. poor jazz. have a new fic up soon.