Reviews for Naruto – Rewrite
Guest chapter 3 . 3/2
I think he should learn it, and if he could summon Gamabunta on his first (successful) try then he can probably summon Manda if taught correctly by Anko (which she would no doubt teach correctly)
Guest chapter 38 . 5/18/2018
Lmao the song
Guest chapter 2 . 2/23/2018
Um..no offense but the 3 chapter is almost word for word of Naruto Mitarashi like seriously. How the hell can you call this a rewrite when your using chapters from someone else's story but I guess you don't got any shame in yourself right as long as you get good reviews. Please if you're gonna write a story don't take chapters from someone else and just change little details like names so people won't notice cause you're clearly stupid.
FromTheUnknown chapter 4 . 10/13/2017
John? really... I don't even know what to say other then what?!
Guest chapter 8 . 12/10/2016
Awesome and yes he should become the new snake sannin
Guest chapter 3 . 12/10/2016
Good yes have him learn aummoning of the snakes and able to summon manda
Tyler chapter 3 . 9/1/2016
Good story so far keep adding more chapters
Guest chapter 46 . 12/21/2015
Sorry, same dude as before, I was looking at published not Updated. I'm so sorry. :-P :-)
Guest chapter 46 . 12/21/2015
You have been away for eight years. I really want to continue to read this series. It has a lot of potential. And while it may not be the most well storms series i have ever read, it is certainly not the worst. It you have abandoned this story or altogether, please tell us, so we don't have a vain hope for continuation.
Guest chapter 30 . 12/20/2015
Rasengan has no elemental type. Naruto adds wind and makes it Rasen Shuriken when older when battling one of the Akatsuki. I think that is when he first adds wind. Please fix this immediately. Also I had an idea. Why doesn't Naruto have snake, toad and slug, instead of just one. It may be to late bit I just felt I had to voice it. Thank you for your time. And one last thing, Got is not a word.
ng jun cheng chapter 29 . 7/25/2015
Good idea. In the main story, it's sakura, so why not
rweed chapter 7 . 5/12/2015
Yes
tails15 chapter 11 . 12/30/2014
no
dbz chapter 30 . 12/6/2014
haha! The choice of action is as random as they come.
It was about curse seal before and now about somehow eating otogakure kunoichi? I mean WTF?
IV Legacy of Poseidon chapter 3 . 11/30/2014
really interesting
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