Please write more! :DDD

I guess Kyon being horrible at tea doesn't carry over to other cooking skills.

A little surprised Nagato would skimp on any detail, but it is very like her to mix at mach 3 with just her hands.

Hmm... going with the Koizumi intentionally losing line of thought?

lol at "Your cake is diseased!"; as you had already had Kyon noting much the same I didn't think that point would be mentioned. Surprised 'hah!' on seeing it. Similarly the Caesar mention carrying over a few sentences, with "Et tu, Brutus?"

Also funny to see Kyon getting away then not getting away at all, and vice versa for Koizumi.

Believable! Well done!

"a dress wearing a face in the doorway"- Whatever You Want.

I really like these short bits prying into the character's perspective, it makes me think of them in completely new ways. although I don't like the pairing or Mikuru very much, I love the way you describe her as fading, especially with the last line, and her own sense of insufficiency. the Vienna Teng line was also very well used; good work!

bahahah. hahah. that was a cute story, realistic in terms of Haruhi's craziness and I honestly had no idea who was going to win. Kyon's perspective is fun to read and so was the chapter overall.

well I don't like any yaoi whatsoever, so I chose not to read it that way, but I really do like the banter you put in here. the very original bit you threw in there about Itsuki having a sister was well-played and I can imagine this happening XD

astounding insight into Yuki's character, I never thought of her own view of her age. I did get slightly annoyed at the KyonxHaruhi bit (because I really don't like it...), but the last paragraph was definitely my favorite, Yuki's view of the elderly. good work!

I was looking through the stories, and I found this one. Please update with another chapter if it's not too much of a hassle! _

Another great chapter. Although I wished the focus would be Mikuru-Koizumi, that small interaction with them filled the hole. Heh. I love your style, and how you put together Kyon's attitude.

ROFL. This is a funny chapter. Koizumi is so blunt but polite at the same time.

Hey, someone else who follows the Mikuru Secretly hates this and wishes she could leave school...

Well actually, the other person was more of the "Mikuru is going to snap and murder Haruhi in revenge for all the torture" line of though, but that's close enough, right? _~

I loved the cake story. xD Kyon's hate for Itsuki is just hilarious for some reason. Every wink and "GOD I WANNA PUNCH HIM" made me laugh. I'm not sure I understand why Itsuki purposely made his cake bad, though... To make Kyon look better, for sure, but...

The danger story was kind of depressing, lol. I don't hold any particular interest in Mikuru, but it's true that she doesn't have much of a presence when she's not serving tea/being harrassed.

Hmm~. Well, I like Itsuki the best out of everyone - with Kyon, of course - so this is one of my favorite chapters! (Pfft. He's totally lying about the bakery! He practices his cooking at home so one day, if Kyon ever comes over... XD)

Oh, I like how you wrote him as messy, too. Sometimes I forget that he's actually a teenage boy, and so I assume everything about him is neat and clean, for some reason. (Probably because I'm just as sloppy as you described him, with his homework... )

I'd type more, but I have to go to bed now! :O

I really like this. Personally, I love chapter 1 but chapter 4 was slightly confusing. Gomenasai. Overall, I really love the characters and how they interact if a bit stereotypical. Of course, Nagato is usually silent so her personality isn't really detailed and Mikiru is secretive so her motives are hidden as well. This is really good and I'm sorry for criticizing so much.

I haven't read through all 4 of your posted chapters yet, but I have read chapter 1.

It was really beautiful. Poetic, in a way. It perfectly conveys the sort of melancholy you'd expect Yuki to feel on a day to day basis.

Thank you for that. It made me smile. :)

These are really good snippets. Totally in character and very entertaining.