I enjoyed it (:

That was seriously cute. I just bet Jade was exactly like that as a kid. xD I couldn't help but go 'aw' for poor Saphir. :3

LOL. I loved this story. I think you did quite a good job at depicting Dist AND Jade's personalities. However, if I'm not mistaken, Nephry is the older sister of Jade, not younger. Other than that, I simply loved it!

Once again, very nicely done! Everything was very believable, and the characterization was perfect.

Aw, little Jade, Dist, and Nephry are so CUTE! I adore how you write little Jade, and you've captured Dist's thoughts perfectly.

Good job!

~*Digitaldreamer*~

yay,its so cute

hey nice job on the details