This is so pretty.

Yesh! Harley! I'm not the only one who sees it then? It's the whole Bonnie and Clyde thing I suppose.

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OMG OMG OMG! I love it! Almost made ME cry too. It's so darkly uplifting! Gah! What am I saying? I'm turning into the characters! No. . . ! lol. But it is good. Really amazing.

I think you captured her vibrant character very well! ]

aw good job

i love Mrs. Lovett

Nice Story. Very Nice.

This is a nice read, I enjoyed it. Mr Todd's in character, and so is Lovett. Good job! You've written this quite well, though I think that when Mrs. Lovett started crying, it could use a little more emotion, because it kind of pops up without warning. Otherwise, I liked it!

You wrote Lovett/Todd so perfectly! I still wish those crazy kids could have worked it out... XD

Wonderful story, it's going in my favorites

That was a very wonderful story. You wrote Mrs. Lovett so great. Very nicely done.

Cutie little storie i like it.

I knew you meant Harley there, and I thought the same thing when I watched the movie!

Ha!

Anyway, it's quite a nicely written story. Neat idea. Good work.

Sorry I don't have much else to say.

Great story. I still root for them, even thou there really isn't any hope. *tears*

Heh, this is cute in a dark kind of way. Keep writing. I like your writing style.

Whoa...Mrs. Lovett IS like Harley Quinn! I knew she reminded me of someone..lol. Anyway, I really like this! Very well written! _

-Forever

That was so cute! She cares so much for him, I was shocked that he never noticed in the movie. It's kind of sad, actually. Poor Lovett.

Keep Dreamin'!

Sweet Nightmare