I love how you wrote this! :)

What a great story!

WOW. The Idea was damn good! I liked your story. Well written first of all, easy to read, emotionally bright. But the idea- that thing makes the best side of your story. It seems to be true. We can not be sure about this. But Naruto as well as Sakura can really feel so in original story. Oh, really, it sounds so much better, so much more real if they really have moments when they are just tired and stop acting like ultimate heroes. But the way both of the characters find strength in each other is beautiful. Though in your story you made it a little bit Naruto-sided. I mean it felt like he is the one who needs the other's determination the most. Well, I am not very sure about it, but you are the author. If I were you I would have made pressure on both sides more. This fic doesn't seem NaruSaku at all with Sakura still loving that bastard Sasuke, but still I find this ultimate connection between them, that even allows them to find spirit power just great and definitely proving. At the same time it is all very disturbing. After all, in the end it can all evolve just into a tragedy show. He is fighting for her, believing that she desires Sasuke and she is fighting for him, believing that he wants to bring his teammate back. Neither of them still want Sasuke for themselves and neither see the truth in each other- they are both wearing masks of determination for each other. Sad irony. And it doesn't make any sense and leads to a tragedy. Thank you for your story. And sorry for my bad English. I wish you Inspiration!

This is seriously awesome! I loved it. It's kind morid but inspirational at the same time, and let's not forget hopeful. You did a great job with this!

-Elie

Aw, this one is sad.

T.T

Thats not nice, lol, no thats okay.